minor edits

Author: John Daggett

css3-fonts/Fonts.html

@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@
 
    <h1>CSS3 Module: Fonts</h1>
 
-   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=editors>Editor's Draft 19 January 2009</h2>
+   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=editors>Editor's Draft 20 January 2009</h2>
 
    <dl id=authors>
     <dt>This version:
@@ -158,8 +158,8 @@ <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=abstract>Abstract</h2>
 
   <p>This CSS3 module describes how font properties are specified and how
    font resources are loaded dynamically. The contents of this specification
-   are a consolidation of content previously divided into into CSS3 Fonts and
-   CSS3 Web Fonts.
+   are a consolidation of content previously divided into CSS3 Fonts and CSS3
+   Web Fonts modules.
 
   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=status>Status of this document</h2>
   <!--begin-status-->
@@ -1834,13 +1834,16 @@ <h3 id=font-reference><span class=secno>4.3 </span>Font reference: the
      <td>N/A
   </table>
 
-  <p>This descriptor is required for referencing actual font data, whether
-   downloadable or locally installed. It is a prioritized, comma-separated
-   list of external references or locally installed font face names. When
-   font data is needed the user agent iterates over the set of references
-   listed, using the first one it can resolve.
+  <p>This descriptor specifies the resource containing font data. It is
+   required , whether the font is downloadable or locally installed. It's
+   value is a prioritized, comma-separated list of external references or
+   locally installed font face names. When a font is needed the user agent
+   iterates over the set of references listed, using the first one it can
+   successfully activate. Fonts containing invalid data are treated as if
+   they were not found, the user agent continues to the next font in the
+   list.
 
-  <p>The external reference consists of a URI, followed by an optional hint
+  <p>External references consist of a URI, followed by an optional hint
    regarding the format of font resource to be found at that URI. The format
    hint contains a comma-separated list of format strings that denote
    well-known font formats. User agents should skip downloading a font
@@ -1911,8 +1914,8 @@ <h3 id=font-reference><span class=secno>4.3 </span>Font reference: the
    <p>Arabic font with different versions for specific platforms:</p>
 
    <pre>
-  src: url(../fonts/LateefRegOT.ttf) format("opentype"), 
-       url(../fonts/LateefRegAAT.ttf) format("truetype-aat");
+  src: url(../fonts/LateefRegAAT.ttf) format("truetype-aat"), 
+       url(../fonts/LateefRegOT.ttf) format("opentype");
 </pre>
 
    <p>A font containing tables to support multiple advanced font formats:</p>