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Author: davidsgrogan

css-fonts-5/Overview.bs

@@ -92,12 +92,14 @@ When the value of the [=text-scale=] content attribute is
 <a for="text-scale">legacy</a> the user agent should set the initial font size
 to 16px multiplied by the font scale factor the user has chosen from any settings <i>provided by the user agent</i>. The ''preferred-text-scale'' value must be 1 on desktop platforms. On mobile:
 <ul>
-	<li>if the operating system provides a text scale setting AND the UA hasn't already applied that factor to the initial font size, ''env()/preferred-text-scale'' returns the mulitplier that the user has chosen in the operating system's text scale setting.</li>
+	<li>if the operating system provides a text scale setting AND the UA hasn't already applied that factor to the initial font size, ''env()/preferred-text-scale'' returns the mulitplier that the user has chosen in the operating system's text scale setting.
+
+	Note: As of this writing, all combinations of Android, iOS, Gecko, WebKit, Blink satisfy this first condition.
+
+	</li>
 	<li>Otherwise ''env()/preferred-text-scale'' returns 1.</li>
 </ul>
 
-Note: As of this writing, all combinations of Android, iOS, Gecko, WebKit, Blink qualify for the first bullet point above.
-
 <h3 id="scale-keyword">The 'scale' keyword</h3>
 
 The <dfn for="text-scale" export><code>scale</code></dfn> property is
@@ -110,13 +112,10 @@ based on a combination of the operating system's text scale setting and the user
 16px, provides a <<length>> that matches that of the initial font size.
 
 Further, when the value of the [=text-scale=] content attribute is
-<a for=text-scale>scale</a>, the user agent should skip all font-sizing interventions it would otherwise perform in an attempt to automatically honor the user's preferences. E.g. text autosizing on mobile (See [[css-size-adjust#intro]]) and full-page zoom (<a href="https://github.com/w3c/csswg-drafts/blob/main/css-env-1/explainers/env-preferred-text-scale.md#windows-11">popular browsers do this on Windows)</a>.
-
-See the <a href="https://github.com/w3c/csswg-drafts/blob/main/css-env-1/explainers/env-preferred-text-scale.md#windows-11">
-preferred text scale explainer</a> for more details.
+<a for=text-scale>scale</a>, the user agent should skip all font-sizing interventions it would otherwise perform in an attempt to automatically honor the user's preferences. E.g. text autosizing on mobile (See [[css-size-adjust#intro]]) and full-application zoom (<a href="https://github.com/w3c/csswg-drafts/blob/main/css-env-1/explainers/env-preferred-text-scale.md#windows-11">popular browsers do this on Windows)</a>.
 
 Note: It is expected that authors will use
-''&lt;meta name="text-scale" content="scale"&gt;'' in stylesheets so that the initial font size will reflect an amalgam of the user's font preferences, whether those are specified at the OS level or the UA level. The author will then be able to use ''rem'' throughout the page to honor the user's font preferences.
+''&lt;meta name="text-scale" content="scale"&gt;'' in stylesheets so that the initial font size will reflect a combination of the user's font preferences, whether those are specified at the OS level or the UA level. The author will then be able to use ''rem'' throughout the page to honor the user's font preferences.
 
 <h3 id="values">
 Value Definitions</h3>