Improve the wording about primary input devices in 'hover' and 'pointer'

Author: Florian Rivoal

css4-mediaqueries/Overview.html

@@ -25,11 +25,11 @@
 
    <h1 id=media-queries>Media Queries Level 4</h1>
 
-   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=w3c-working>Editor's Draft 22 May 2012</h2>
+   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=w3c-working>Editor's Draft 23 May 2012</h2>
 
    <dl>
     <dt>This Version:</dt>
-    <!-- <dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/ED-css4-mediaqueries-20120522//">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/ED-css4-mediaqueries-20120522/</a></dd> -->
+    <!-- <dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/ED-css4-mediaqueries-20120523//">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/ED-css4-mediaqueries-20120523/</a></dd> -->
 
     <dd><a
      href="http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css4-mediaqueries/">http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css4-mediaqueries/</a>
@@ -1078,8 +1078,8 @@ <h3 id=pointer><span class=secno>4.15. </span>pointer</h3>
   <p>The ‘<code class=css>pointer</code>’ media feature is used to query
    about the presence and accuracy of a pointing device such as a mouse. If a
    device has multiple input mechanisms, it is recommended that the UA
-   reports the characteristics of the pointing device of the primary input
-   mechanism. It takes the following values:
+   reports the characteristics of the least capable pointing device of the
+   primary input mechanisms. This media query takes the following values:
 
   <dl>
    <dt><dfn id=none title="pointer:none">‘<code
@@ -1140,9 +1140,9 @@ <h3 id=hover><span class=secno>4.16. </span>hover</h3>
    whether primary pointing system used on the output device can hover or
    not. If it can, the value will be 1. Otherwise, the value will be 0.
 
-  <p>If a device has multiple pointing systems, some of which support
+  <p>If a device has multiple pointing devices, some of which support
    hovering and some of which not, it is recommended that the UA reports the
-   hovering ability of the primary pointing system.
+   hovering ability of the least capable of the primary pointing devices.
 
   <p class=note> The value of ‘<code class=css>hover</code>’ media query
    should for example be 0 on a touch screen device that can also be
@@ -1230,9 +1230,9 @@ <h2 class=no-num id=acknowledgments>Acknowledgments</h2>
 
   <p>Comments from Arve Bersvendsen, Björn Höhrmann, Chris Lilley,
    Christoph Päper, L. David Baron, Melinda Grant, Nicholas C. Zakas Philipp
-   Hoschka, Rijk van Geijtenbeek, Roger Gimson, Sigurd Lerstad, Simon
-   Kissane, Simon Pieters, Steven Pemberton and Susan Lesch, improved this
-   specification.
+   Hoschka, Rick Byers, Rijk van Geijtenbeek, Roger Gimson, Sigurd Lerstad,
+   Simon Kissane, Simon Pieters, Steven Pemberton and Susan Lesch, improved
+   this specification.
 
   <h2 class=no-num id=references>References</h2>
 

css4-mediaqueries/Overview.src.html

@@ -946,8 +946,8 @@ <h3 id="pointer">pointer</h3>
 <p>The ''pointer'' media feature is used to query about the presence and
 accuracy of a pointing device such as a mouse. If a device has multiple input
 mechanisms, it is recommended that the UA reports the characteristics of the
-pointing device of the primary input mechanism. It takes the following
-values:</p>
+least capable pointing device of the primary input mechanisms. This
+media query takes the following values:</p>
 
 <dl>
 	<dt><dfn title="pointer:none">''none''</dfn></dt>
@@ -994,9 +994,9 @@ <h3 id="hover">hover</h3>
 used on the output device can hover or not.  If it can, the value will be 1.
 Otherwise, the value will be 0.</p>
 
-<p>If a device has multiple pointing systems, some of which support hovering
-and some of which not, it is recommended that the UA reports the hovering
-ability of the primary pointing system.</p>
+<p>If a device has multiple pointing devices, some of which support hovering
+and some of which not, it is  recommended that the UA reports the hovering
+ability of the least capable of the primary pointing devices.</p>
 
 <p class="note">
 The value of ''hover'' media query should for example be 0 on a touch screen
@@ -1076,6 +1076,7 @@ <h2 class="no-num" id="acknowledgments">Acknowledgments</h2>
  Melinda Grant,
  Nicholas C. Zakas
  Philipp Hoschka,
+ Rick Byers,
  Rijk van Geijtenbeek,
  Roger Gimson,
  Sigurd Lerstad,