minor corrections

Author: danielweck

css3-speech/Overview.html

@@ -200,8 +200,8 @@ <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=contents>Table of contents</h2>
     class=property>voice-balance</code>&rsquo;</a>
 
    <li><a href="#speaking-props"><span class=secno>5. </span>Speaking
-    properties: &lsquo;<code class=property>speak</code>&rsquo;, &lsquo;<code
-    class=property>speak-as</code>&rsquo;</a>
+    properties: &lsquo;<code class=property>speak</code>&rsquo; and
+    &lsquo;<code class=property>speak-as</code>&rsquo;</a>
 
    <li><a href="#pause-props"><span class=secno>6. </span>Pause properties:
     &lsquo;<code class=property>pause-before</code>&rsquo;, &lsquo;<code
@@ -303,12 +303,12 @@ <h2 id=introduction><span class=secno>1. </span>Introduction</h2>
   <p>The speech rendering of a document, already commonly used by the blind
    and print-impaired communities, combines speech synthesis and "auditory
    icons". Often such aural presentation occurs by converting the document to
-   plain text and feeding this to a <dfn id=screen-reader>screen reader</dfn>
-   &mdash; software or hardware that simply reads all the characters on the
-   screen. This results in less effective presentation than would be the case
-   if the document structure were retained. Style sheet properties for text
-   to speech can be used together with visual properties (mixed media) or as
-   an aural alternative to visual presentation.
+   plain text and feeding this to a screen reader &mdash; software or
+   hardware that simply reads all the characters on the screen. This results
+   in less effective presentation than would be the case if the document
+   structure were retained. Style sheet properties for text to speech can be
+   used together with visual properties (mixed media) or as an aural
+   alternative to visual presentation.
 
   <p>Besides the obvious accessibility advantages, there are other large
    markets for listening to information, including in-car use, industrial and
@@ -367,14 +367,14 @@ <h2 id=css21-rel><span class=secno>2. </span>Relationship with CSS2.1</h2>
    statements are ignored by user-agents that do not support speech
    synthesis.
 
-  <h2 id=aural-model><span class=secno>3. </span>The aural "box" model</h2>
+  <h2 id=aural-model><span class=secno>3. </span>The <dfn
+   id=aural-box-model>aural "box" model</dfn></h2>
 
   <p>The formatting model of CSS for aural media is based on a sequence of
    sounds and silences that appear in a nested model which is related to the
    <a href="#box-model-def">visual box model</a>; however the aural canvas is
    one-dimensional, monolinear. For compatibility with the visual box model,
-   we will call it the <dfn id=aural-box-model>aural "box" model</dfn>.
-   <!-- [[CSS3BOX]] -->
+   we will call it the aural "box" model. <!-- [[CSS3BOX]] -->
 
   <p>The element is surrounded by, in this order, &lsquo;<a
    href="#rest"><code class=property>rest</code></a>&rsquo;, &lsquo;<a
@@ -392,8 +392,8 @@ <h2 id=aural-model><span class=secno>3. </span>The aural "box" model</h2>
   <p><img alt="A graph depicting the aural 'box' model." id=aural-box
    src=aural-box.png>
 
-  <p>where <dfn id=ltelementgt>&lt;element&gt;</dfn> is the selected element
-   to which the properties from the CSS3 Speech Module apply.
+  <p>where &lt;element&gt; is the selected element to which the properties
+   from the CSS3 Speech Module apply.
 
   <h2 id=mixing-props><span class=secno>4. </span>Mixing properties:
    &lsquo;<a href="#voice-volume"><code
@@ -630,7 +630,7 @@ <h2 id=mixing-props><span class=secno>4. </span>Mixing properties:
 <em>does</em> apply to <a href="#cue-props">audio cues</a>.</p -->
 
   <h2 id=speaking-props><span class=secno>5. </span>Speaking properties:
-   &lsquo;<a href="#speak"><code class=property>speak</code></a>&rsquo;,
+   &lsquo;<a href="#speak"><code class=property>speak</code></a>&rsquo; and
    &lsquo;<a href="#speak-as"><code class=property>speak-as</code></a>&rsquo;</h2>
   <!-- <p>An additional speech property, speak-header, is described in the
 CSS module covering tables.</p> -->
@@ -3025,9 +3025,6 @@ <h2 class=no-num id=index>Appendix C &mdash; Index</h2>
 
    <li>documents, <a href="#document" title=documents><strong>#</strong></a>
 
-   <li>&lt;element&gt;, <a href="#ltelementgt"
-    title="&lt;element&gt;"><strong>3.</strong></a>
-
    <li>font-family, <a href="#font-family-def"
     title=font-family><strong>#</strong></a>
 
@@ -3069,9 +3066,6 @@ <h2 class=no-num id=index>Appendix C &mdash; Index</h2>
    <li>rest-before, <a href="#rest-before"
     title=rest-before><strong>7.</strong></a>
 
-   <li>screen reader, <a href="#screen-reader" title="screen
-    reader"><strong>1.</strong></a>
-
    <li>speak, <a href="#speak" title=speak><strong>5.</strong></a>
 
    <li>speak-as, <a href="#speak-as" title=speak-as><strong>5.</strong></a>

css3-speech/Overview.src.html

@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ <h2 id="introduction"><span class="secno">1. </span>Introduction</h2>
 the blind and print-impaired communities, combines speech synthesis
 and "auditory icons". Often such aural presentation occurs by
 converting the document to plain text and feeding this to a 
-<dfn>screen reader</dfn> &mdash; software or hardware that simply
+screen reader &mdash; software or hardware that simply
 reads all the characters on the screen. This results in less
 effective presentation than would be the case if the document
 structure were retained. Style sheet properties for text to speech
@@ -220,13 +220,13 @@ <h2 id="css21-rel"><span class="secno">2. </span>Relationship with CSS2.1</h2>
 are ignored by user-agents that do not support speech synthesis.
 </p>
 
-<h2 id="aural-model"><span class="secno">3. </span>The aural "box" model</h2>
+<h2 id="aural-model"><span class="secno">3. </span>The <dfn id="aural-box-model">aural "box" model</dfn></h2>
 
 <p>The formatting model of CSS for aural media is based on a sequence
 of sounds and silences that appear in a nested model which is
 related to the <a href="#box-model-def">visual box model</a>; however the aural canvas is one-dimensional,
 monolinear. For compatibility with the visual box model, we will call
-it the <dfn id="aural-box-model">aural "box" model</dfn>.
+it the aural "box" model.
 <!-- [[CSS3BOX]] -->
 </p>
 
@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ <h2 id="aural-model"><span class="secno">3. </span>The aural "box" model</h2>
 
 <p><img id="aural-box" src="aural-box.png" alt="A graph depicting the aural 'box' model."/></p>
 
-<p>where <dfn>&lt;element&gt;</dfn> is the selected element to which the properties
+<p>where &lt;element&gt; is the selected element to which the properties
 from the CSS3 Speech Module apply.</p>
 
 <h2 id="mixing-props"><span class="secno">4. </span>Mixing properties:
@@ -451,7 +451,7 @@ <h2 id="mixing-props"><span class="secno">4. </span>Mixing properties:
 <em>does</em> apply to <a href="#cue-props">audio cues</a>.</p -->
 
 <h2 id="speaking-props"><span class="secno">5. </span>Speaking properties:
-'speak', 'speak-as'</h2>
+'speak' and 'speak-as'</h2>
 
 <!-- <p>An additional speech property, speak-header, is described in the
 CSS module covering tables.</p> -->