[css2] Added some commas.

bert-github · bert-github · commit 264165eddae9 · 2009-05-12T11:47:41.000Z
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extra : convert_revision : svn%3A73dc7c4b-06e6-40f3-b4f7-9ed1dbc14bfc/trunk%402941
diff --git a/css2/intro.src b/css2/intro.src
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01//EN">
 <html lang="en">
-<!-- $Id: intro.src,v 2.49 2008-07-10 18:22:11 bbos Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Id: intro.src,v 2.50 2009-05-12 11:47:41 bbos Exp $ -->
 <HEAD>
 <TITLE>Introduction to CSS&nbsp;2.1</TITLE>
 </HEAD>
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ property ('color') and value ('red'). While the example above tries to
 influence only one of the properties needed for rendering an HTML
 document, it qualifies as a style sheet on its own. Combined with
 other style sheets (one fundamental feature of CSS is that style
-sheets are combined) it will determine the final presentation of the
+sheets are combined), the rule will determine the final presentation of the
 document.
 
 <P> The HTML 4 specification defines how style sheet rules may be
@@ -211,8 +211,8 @@ ARTICLE, HEADLINE, AUTHOR, PARA { display: block }
 <P>The first rule declares INSTRUMENT to be inline and the second
 rule, with its comma-separated list of selectors, declares all the
 other elements to be block-level. Element names in XML are
-case-sensitive, so a selector written in lowercase (e.g. 'instrument')
-is different from uppercase (e.g. 'INSTRUMENT').
+case-sensitive, so a selector written in lowercase (e.g., 'instrument')
+is different from uppercase (e.g., 'INSTRUMENT').
 
 <P>One way of linking a style sheet to an XML document is to use
 a processing instruction:
