Clarifications to bidi

Author: fantasai

css3-writing-modes/Overview.html

@@ -32,15 +32,15 @@
 
    <h1>CSS Writing Modes Module Level 3</h1>
 
-   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=longstatus-date>Editor's Draft 24 April 2012</h2>
+   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=longstatus-date>Editor's Draft 25 April 2012</h2>
 
    <dl>
     <dt>This version:
 
     <dd><a
      href="http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-writing-modes/">http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-writing-modes/</a>
      <!--
-    <dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-css3-writing-modes-20120424/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/ED-css3-writing-modes-20120424/</a>
+    <dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-css3-writing-modes-20120425/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/ED-css3-writing-modes-20120425/</a>
 -->
 
 
@@ -554,7 +554,7 @@ <h2 id=text-direction><span class=secno>2. </span> Inline Direction and
    block, but in the case of a paragraph contained by bidi <a
    href="#isolate">isolation</a> it is the isolating inline element instead.
 
-  <p>Because the base directionality of a text depends on the structure and
+  <p>Because the base direction of a text depends on the structure and
    semantics of the document, the &lsquo;<a href="#direction0"><code
    class=property>direction</code></a>&rsquo; and &lsquo;<a
    href="#unicode-bidi0"><code class=property>unicode-bidi</code></a>&rsquo;
@@ -621,15 +621,15 @@ <h3 id=direction><span class=secno>2.1. </span> Specifying Directionality:
      <td>specified value
   </table>
 
-  <p>This property specifies the base directionality of text and elements on
-   a line, and the directionality of embeddings and overrides (see &lsquo;<a
-   href="#unicode-bidi0"><code class=property>unicode-bidi</code></a>&rsquo;)
-   for the Unicode bidirectional algorithm. In addition, it affects the
+  <p>This property specifies the inline base direction or directionality of
+   any bidi paragraph, embedding, or override established by the element.
+   (See &lsquo;<a href="#unicode-bidi0"><code
+   class=property>unicode-bidi</code></a>&rsquo;) In addition, it informs the
    ordering of <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS21/tables.html">table</a>
    column layout, the direction of horizontal <a
    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS21/visufx.html#overflow">overflow</a>, and
-   the default alignment of text within a line, and other things that depend
-   on the base inline base direction.
+   the default alignment of text within a line, and other layout effects that
+   depend on the element's inline base direction.
 
   <p>Values for this property have the following meanings:
 
@@ -776,8 +776,8 @@ <h3 id=unicode-bidi><span class=secno>2.2. </span> Embeddings and
      class=property>direction</code></a>&rsquo; as usual, but by following
      the heuristic in rules P2 and P3 of the Unicode bidirectional algorithm.
      An element immediately contains a bidi paragraph if the element itself,
-     but none of its descendants, is a block container or bidi-isolating
-     inline that contains the entire bidi paragraph.
+     but none of its descendants, both contains the entire bidi paragraph and
+     is a block container or bidi-isolating inline.
   </dl>
 
   <p class=note>Because the &lsquo;<a href="#unicode-bidi0"><code

css3-writing-modes/Overview.src.html

@@ -244,7 +244,7 @@ <h2 id="text-direction">
     of a paragraph contained by bidi <a href="#isolate">isolation</a> it
     is the isolating inline element instead.
 
-  <p>Because the base directionality of a text depends on the structure and
+  <p>Because the base direction of a text depends on the structure and
     semantics of the document, the 'direction' and 'unicode-bidi' properties
     should in most cases be used only to map bidi information in the markup
     to its corresponding CSS styles.
@@ -300,14 +300,14 @@ <h3 id="direction">
     </tbody>
   </table>
 
-  <p>This property specifies the base directionality of text and elements
-    on a line, and the directionality of embeddings and overrides (see
-    'unicode-bidi') for the Unicode
-    bidirectional algorithm. In addition, it affects the ordering of <a
-    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS21/tables.html">table</a> column layout,
+  <p>This property specifies the inline base direction or directionality
+    of any bidi paragraph, embedding, or override established by the element.
+    (See 'unicode-bidi')
+    In addition, it informs the ordering of
+    <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS21/tables.html">table</a> column layout,
     the direction of horizontal <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS21/visufx.html#overflow">overflow</a>,
-    and the default alignment of text within a line, and other things
-    that depend on the base inline base direction.</p>
+    and the default alignment of text within a line, and other layout effects
+    that depend on the element's inline base direction.</p>
 
   <p>Values for this property have the following meanings:</p>
 
@@ -419,8 +419,8 @@ <h3 id="unicode-bidi">
       by the element's computed 'direction' as usual, but by following the
       heuristic in rules P2 and P3 of the Unicode bidirectional algorithm.
       An element immediately contains a bidi paragraph if the element itself,
-      but none of its descendants, is a block container or bidi-isolating
-      inline that contains the entire bidi paragraph.
+      but none of its descendants, both contains the entire bidi paragraph
+      and is a block container or bidi-isolating inline.
   </dl>
 
   <p class=note>Because the 'unicode-bidi' property does not inherit,