[css-writing-modes] Refelected feedback to Example 19 from John Daggett

Author: kojiishi

css-writing-modes/Overview.html

@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
 </a></p>
   <h1 class="p-name no-ref" id=title>CSS Writing Modes Level 3</h1>
   <h2 class="no-num no-toc no-ref heading settled heading" id=subtitle><span class=content>Editor’s Draft,
-    <span class=dt-updated><span class=value-title title=20130916>16 September 2013</span></span></span></h2>
+    <span class=dt-updated><span class=value-title title=20130924>24 September 2013</span></span></span></h2>
   <div data-fill-with=spec-metadata><dl><dt>This version:<dd><a class=u-url href=http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-writing-modes-3/>http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-writing-modes-3/</a><dt>Latest version:<dd><a href=http://www.w3.org/TR/css3-writing-modes/>http://www.w3.org/TR/css3-writing-modes/</a><dt>Editor’s Draft:<dd><a href=http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-writing-modes-3/>http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-writing-modes-3/</a>
 <dt>Feedback:</dt>
     <dd><a href="mailto:www-style@w3.org?subject=%5Bcss-writing-modes%5D%20feedback">www-style@w3.org</a>
@@ -2366,8 +2366,8 @@ <h4 class="heading settled heading" data-level=9.1.2 id=text-combine-compression
         Note that the number of <a href=#character>characters</a> ≠ number of Unicode codepoints!
       <li>Horizontally scale the result to 1em if it is not yet 1em or narrower.
     </ol>
-    <p>A more sophisticated OpenType implementation might compose the text
-    first with normal (proportional-width) glyphs to see if that fits,
+    <p>Another implementation that utilizes OpenType layout features might compose the text
+    first with normal glyphs to see if that fits,
     then substitute in half-width or third-width forms as available and necessary,
     possibly adjusting its approach or combining it with scaling operations
     depending on the available glyph substitutions.

css-writing-modes/Overview.src.html

@@ -2383,8 +2383,8 @@ <h4 id="text-combine-compression">
         Note that the number of <i>characters</i> &ne; number of Unicode codepoints!
       <li>Horizontally scale the result to 1em if it is not yet 1em or narrower.
     </ol>
-    <p>A more sophisticated OpenType implementation might compose the text
-    first with normal (proportional-width) glyphs to see if that fits,
+    <p>Another implementation that utilizes OpenType layout features might compose the text
+    first with normal glyphs to see if that fits,
     then substitute in half-width or third-width forms as available and necessary,
     possibly adjusting its approach or combining it with scaling operations
     depending on the available glyph substitutions.