Per discussion at face-to-face meeting, expand on abstract (mentioning XUL), and distinguish current and former editors.

Author: dbaron

css3-flexbox/Overview.html

@@ -11,12 +11,12 @@
   <div class=head>
    <h1 id=head-box-flexible>Flexible Box Layout Module</h1>
 
-   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=w3c-working>Editor's Draft, 12 May 2009</h2>
+   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=w3c-working>Editor's Draft, 10 June 2009</h2>
 
    <dl>
     <dt>This version:
 
-    <dd><!-- <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/WD-css3-flexbox-20090512/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/WD-css3-flexbox-20090512/</a></dd> -->
+    <dd><!-- <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/WD-css3-flexbox-20090610/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/WD-css3-flexbox-20090610/</a></dd> -->
      <a
      href="http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-flexbox/">http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-flexbox/</a>
 
@@ -32,10 +32,12 @@ <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=w3c-working>Editor's Draft, 12 May 2009</h2>
     <dd>L. David Baron, Mozilla Corporation, <a
      href="mailto:dbaron@dbaron.org">dbaron@dbaron.org</a>
 
+    <dt>Authors and former editors:
+
     <dd>Neil Deakin, Mozilla Corporation, <a
      href="mailto:enndeakin@sympatico.ca">enndeakin@sympatico.ca</a>
 
-    <dd>Ian Hickson, Opera Software, <a
+    <dd>Ian Hickson, formerly of Opera Software, <a
      href="mailto:ian@hixie.ch">ian@hixie.ch</a>
 
     <dd>David Hyatt, Apple, <a
@@ -64,8 +66,17 @@ <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=w3c-working>Editor's Draft, 12 May 2009</h2>
 
   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=abstract><a name=abstract>Abstract</a></h2>
 
-  <p>The draft describes a CSS box model optimised for interface design. <a
-   href="#CSS21" rel=biblioentry>[CSS21]<!--{{!CSS21}}--></a>
+  <p>The draft describes a CSS box model optimised for interface design. It
+   provides an additional layout system alongside the ones already in CSS. <a
+   href="#CSS21" rel=biblioentry>[CSS21]<!--{{!CSS21}}--></a> In this new box
+   model, the children of a box are laid out either horizontally or
+   vertically, and unused space can be assigned to a particular child or
+   distributed among the children by assignment of &ldquo;flex&rdquo; to the
+   children that should expand. Nesting of these boxes (horizontal inside
+   vertical, or vertical inside horizontal) can be used to build layouts in
+   two dimensions. This model is based on the box model in the XUL
+   user-interface language used for the user interface of many Mozilla-based
+   applications (such as Firefox).
 
   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=table><a name=contents>Table of contents</a></h2>
   <!--begin-toc-->

css3-flexbox/Overview.src.html

@@ -17,10 +17,11 @@ <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="w3c-working">[LONGSTATUS], [DATE]</h2>
   <dt>Latest version:
     <dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/css3-flexbox/">http://www.w3.org/TR/css3-flexbox/</a>
     <dt>Editors:
-
     <dd>L. David Baron, Mozilla Corporation, <a href="mailto:dbaron@dbaron.org">dbaron@dbaron.org</a>
+
+    <dt>Authors and former editors:
     <dd>Neil Deakin, Mozilla Corporation, <a href="mailto:enndeakin@sympatico.ca">enndeakin@sympatico.ca</a>
-    <dd>Ian Hickson, Opera Software, <a href="mailto:ian@hixie.ch">ian@hixie.ch</a>
+    <dd>Ian Hickson, formerly of Opera Software, <a href="mailto:ian@hixie.ch">ian@hixie.ch</a>
     <dd>David Hyatt, Apple, <a href="mailto:hyatt@apple.com">hyatt@apple.com</a>
    </dl>
    <!--copyright-->
@@ -30,7 +31,16 @@ <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="w3c-working">[LONGSTATUS], [DATE]</h2>
   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="abstract"><a name="abstract">Abstract</a></h2>
 
   <p>The draft describes a CSS box model optimised for interface design.
-     [[!CSS21]]
+  It provides an additional layout system alongside the ones already in
+  CSS.  [[!CSS21]]  In this new box model, the children of a box are
+  laid out either horizontally or vertically, and unused space can be
+  assigned to a particular child or distributed among the children by
+  assignment of &ldquo;flex&rdquo; to the children that should expand.
+  Nesting of these boxes (horizontal inside vertical, or vertical inside
+  horizontal) can be used to build layouts in two dimensions.  This
+  model is based on the box model in the XUL user-interface language
+  used for the user interface of many Mozilla-based applications
+  (such as Firefox).</p>
 
   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="table"><a name="contents">Table of
    contents</a></h2>