2009-11-24 dbaron@dbaron.org

- fix sentence structure (oddly placed parenthetical) that caused confusion

Author: dbaron

css3-transitions/ChangeLog

@@ -1,3 +1,7 @@
+2009-11-24 dbaron@dbaron.org
+
+- fix sentence structure (oddly placed parenthetical) that caused confusion
+
 2009-11-22 dbaron@dbaron.org
 
 - define that unknown and non-animatable properties must be kept in the

css3-transitions/Overview.html

@@ -29,15 +29,15 @@
 
    <h1>CSS Transitions Module Level 3</h1>
 
-   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=longstatus-date>Editor's Draft 23 November
+   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=longstatus-date>Editor's Draft 24 November
     2009</h2>
 
    <dl>
     <dt>This version:
 
-    <dd> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/ED-css3-transitions-20091123">
+    <dd> <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/ED-css3-transitions-20091124">
      http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-transitions/</a>
-     <!--http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/WD-css3-transitions-20091123-->
+     <!--http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/WD-css3-transitions-20091124-->
 
     <dt>Latest version:
 
@@ -774,8 +774,8 @@ <h2 id=starting><span class=secno>3 </span> Starting of transitions</h2>
    must stop (and the property must immediately change to its final value).
 
   <p> Implementations must not start a transition when the computed value of
-   a property changes as a result of declarative (as opposed to scripted)
-   animation.
+   a property changes as a result of declarative animation (as opposed to
+   scripted animation).
 
   <p> Implementations also must not start a transition when the computed
    value changes because it is inherited (directly or indirectly) from

css3-transitions/Overview.src.html

@@ -712,8 +712,8 @@ <h2 id="starting">
 
       <p>
 		Implementations must not start a transition when the computed
-		value of a property changes as a result of declarative (as
-		opposed to scripted) animation.
+		value of a property changes as a result of declarative animation
+		(as opposed to scripted animation).
       </p>
 
       <p>