cleaning up draft

Author: howcom

css3-gcpm/Overview.src.html

@@ -141,26 +141,6 @@ <h2 class="no-num no-toc"><a name="contents">Table of contents</a></h2>
 included here automatically.]</p>
 <!--end-toc-->
 
-<!--
-<h2 id=dependencies>Dependencies on other modules</h2>
-
-<p>This CSS3 module has normative references to the following other CSS3
-modules:</p>
-<ul>
-  <li>[[!CSS3LIST]]</li>
-  <li>[[!CSS3VAL]]</li>
-</ul>
-
-
-<p>This CSS3 module has non-normative references to the following other CSS3
-modules:</p>
-
-<ul>
-  <li>[[CSS3COL]]</li>
-  <li>[[CSS3PAGE]]</li>
-  <li>[[CSS3MULTICOL]]</li>
-</ul>
--->
 
 <h2>Introduction</h2>
 
@@ -2888,29 +2868,7 @@ <h2>Page floats</h2>
 
 
 <p>To support page floats, the <span class=property>'float'</span>
-property is extended with several new values. In this list, the new
-values are listed and categorized (along with the existing 'left',
-'right' and 'none' keywords, and the 'footnote' and 'to()' as described above):
-
-<ul>
-<li>horizontal keywords: left right inside outside
-<li>vertical keywords: top bottom 
-<li>flow root keywords: page multicol
-<li>modifier keyword: next unless-room
-<li>other keywords: none hide footnote to() page()
-</ul>
-
-<p>The keywords can be combined to form more complex expressions.
-
-<div class="example">
-<p>This code floats figures to the top of the next page:
-
-<pre>
-.figure { 
-  float: top next page;
-}
-</pre>
-</div>
+property is extended with several new values:
 
 <!--
 
@@ -2932,7 +2890,6 @@ <h2>Page floats</h2>
 
 -->
 
-<p>The new values have the following meaning:
 
 <dl>
    <dt>inside
@@ -2953,27 +2910,7 @@ <h2>Page floats</h2>
    <dd>The element may intrude neighboring columns; if the element is not in a multi-column element, this keyword has no effect.
 
    <dt>unless-room
-   <dd>if the element can be laid out in its natural position without causing a page break, it should be laid out there disregarding the 'float' property; in other cases the other values on 'float' will dertermine its floating behaviour
-
-<div class="example">
-<p>Float the figure to the top of the next page, unless it fits in its natural position without causing a page break:
-
-<pre>
-.figure { 
-  float: top next page unless-room;
-}
-</pre>
-</div>
-
-<div class="example">
-<p>Hide the element unless it fits in its natural position without causing a page break:
-
-<pre>
-.figure { 
-  float: hide unless-room;
-}
-</pre>
-</div>
+   <dd>If the element can be laid out in its natural position without causing a page break, it should be laid out there disregarding the 'float' property; in other cases the other values on 'float' will dertermine its floating behaviour.
 
 
    <dt>top
@@ -3001,8 +2938,17 @@ <h2>Page floats</h2>
 
 </dl>
 
+<p>The values on float are categorized as such:
+
+<ul>
+<li>horizontal keywords: left right inside outside
+<li>vertical keywords: top bottom 
+<li>flow root keywords: page multicol
+<li>modifier keyword: next unless-room
+<li>other keywords: none hide footnote page()
+</ul>
 
-<p>The keywords can be combined into sets this way: 
+<p>The keywords can be combined to form more complex expressions with these restrictions:
 
 <ul>
 <li>only one horizontal keyword can appear in a set
@@ -3019,7 +2965,6 @@ <h2>Page floats</h2>
 <pre>
 .figure { 
   float: top page;
-  width: 1gr;
 }
 </pre>
 </div>
@@ -3030,21 +2975,10 @@ <h2>Page floats</h2>
 <pre>
 .figure { 
   float: top next page;
-  width: 1gr;
 }
 </pre>
 </div>
 
-<div class="example">
-<p>Float figure to the top right of the multi-column element:
-
-<pre>
-.figure { 
-  float: top right multicol;
-  width: 1gr;
-}
-</pre>
-</div>
 
 
 <div class="example">
@@ -3053,7 +2987,6 @@ <h2>Page floats</h2>
 <pre>
 @footnote { 
   float: bottom inside multicol; 
-  width: 1gr;
 }
 </pre>
 </div>
@@ -3072,12 +3005,21 @@ <h2>Page floats</h2>
 
 
 <div class="example">
-<p>If there is room on the current page, show the element in place.  If
-there isn't room on the current page, hide the element. 
+<p>Float the figure to the top of the next page, unless it fits in its natural position without causing a page break:
 
 <pre>
 .figure { 
-  float: none, hide;
+  float: top next page unless-room;
+}
+</pre>
+</div>
+
+<div class="example">
+<p>Hide the element unless it fits in its natural position without causing a page break:
+
+<pre>
+.figure { 
+  float: hide unless-room;
 }
 </pre>
 </div>
@@ -3094,7 +3036,7 @@ <h2>Page floats</h2>
 </pre>
 
 In the above code, the element is take out of the flow, which is
-allowed to contiue on the same page. If the flow should be broken,
+allowed to continue on the same page. If the flow should be broken,
 this code can be used:
 
 <pre>
@@ -3131,7 +3073,6 @@ <h2>Page floats</h2>
 </div>
 
 
-
 <p>For non-replaced elements in horizontal text, values on 'float'
 that have a horizontal component ('right', 'left', 'outside',
 'inside') will result in shrink-wrap width calculations as per CSS 2.1
@@ -3284,7 +3225,7 @@ <h2>Advanced multi-column layout</h2>
 <p>The proposed functionality relies on three new components:
 
 <ul>
-<li>one new value on float: ''multicol'':
+<li>one new value on float: ''multicol'' (listed in the previous section)
 <li>one new property: 'float-offset'
 <li>one new unit: ''gr''
 </ul>
@@ -3305,7 +3246,7 @@ <h2>Advanced multi-column layout</h2>
 Each column has one grid line on each side corresponding to the
 content edge of the content box. 
 
-<p>The 'gr' unit has two purposes. When used on the 'float-offset'
+<p>The ''gr'' unit has two purposes. When used on the 'float-offset'
 property it identifies a position by counting columns and gaps from
 the position established by the 'float' property. Fractions on the
 'gr' unit refer to fractions of the last counted gap or column.