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css3-values/Overview.html

@@ -96,12 +96,9 @@ <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=longstatus-date>Editor's Draft 5 March 2012</h2>
 
   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=abstract>Abstract</h2>
 
-  <p>This CSS3 module describes the various values and units that CSS
-   properties accept. Also, it describes how values are computed from
-   "specified" through "computed" and "used" into "actual" values. The main
-   purpose of this module is to define common values and units in one
-   specification which can be referred to by other modules. As such, it does
-   not make sense to claim conformance with this module alone.
+  <p>This CSS3 module describes the common values and units that CSS
+   properties accept and the syntax used for describing them in CSS property
+   definitions.
 
   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=status>Status of this document</h2>
   <!--begin-status-->
@@ -138,22 +135,24 @@ <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=status>Status of this document</h2>
    W3C Patent Policy</a>.</p>
   <!--end-status-->
 
+  <p>This specification is a <strong>Last Call Working Draft</strong>. All
+   persons are encouraged to review this document and <strong>send comments
+   to the <a
+   href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-style/">www-style</a>
+   mailing list</strong> as described above. The <strong>deadline for
+   comments</strong> is <strong>29 March 2012</strong>.
+
   <p>All features described in this specification that also exist in CSS 2.1
    <a href="#CSS21" rel=biblioentry>[CSS21]<!--{{!CSS21}}--></a> are intended
-   to be backwards compatible. In case of conflict between this draft and
-   CSS&nbsp;2.1 <a href="#CSS21"
-   rel=biblioentry>[CSS21]<!--{{!CSS21}}--></a>, CSS&nbsp;2.1 probably
-   represents the intention of the CSS WG better than this draft (other than
-   on values and units that are new to CSS3).
+   to be backwards compatible. If you notice a conflict between this draft
+   and CSS&nbsp;2.1 <a href="#CSS21"
+   rel=biblioentry>[CSS21]<!--{{!CSS21}}--></a>, please inform the editors!
 
   <p>The following features are at-risk and may be dropped during the CR
    period: &lsquo;<a href="#calc0"><code class=css>calc()</code></a>&rsquo;,
    &lsquo;<a href="#cycle-value"><code class=css>cycle()</code></a>&rsquo;,
    &lsquo;<a href="#attr-value"><code class=css>attr()</code></a>&rsquo;.
 
-  <p>This specification is a <strong>Last Call Working Draft.</strong> The
-   <strong>deadline for comments</strong> is <strong>29 March 2012</strong>.
-
   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=contents>Table of contents</h2>
   <!--begin-toc-->
 

css3-values/Overview.src.html

@@ -60,32 +60,28 @@ <h2 class="no-num no-toc">[LONGSTATUS] [DATE]</h2>
 
 <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="abstract">Abstract</h2>
 
-<p>This CSS3 module describes the various values and units that CSS
-properties accept. Also, it describes how values are computed from
-"specified" through "computed" and "used" into "actual" values. The
-main purpose of this module is to define common values and units in
-one specification which can be referred to by other modules. As such,
-it does not make sense to claim conformance with this module
-alone.</p>
+<p>This CSS3 module describes the common values and units that CSS
+properties accept and the syntax used for describing them in CSS
+property definitions.</p>
 
 <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="status">Status of this document</h2>
 
 <!--status-->
 
+<p>This specification is a <strong>Last Call Working Draft</strong>. All
+persons are encouraged to review this document and <strong>send comments
+to the <a href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-style/">www-style</a>
+mailing list</strong> as described above. The <strong>deadline for
+comments</strong> is <strong>29 March 2012</strong>.
+
 <p>All features described in this specification that also
 exist in CSS 2.1 [[!CSS21]] are intended to be backwards compatible.
-In case of conflict between this draft and CSS&nbsp;2.1 [[!CSS21]],
-CSS&nbsp;2.1 probably represents the intention of the CSS WG better
-than this draft (other than on values and units that are new to
-CSS3).
+If you notice a conflict between this draft and CSS&nbsp;2.1 [[!CSS21]],
+please inform the editors!
 
 <p>The following features are at-risk and may be dropped during the
 CR period: ''calc()'', ''cycle()'', ''attr()''.
 
-<p>This specification is a <strong>Last Call Working Draft.</strong>
-The <strong>deadline for comments</strong> is <strong>29 March
-2012</strong>.
-
 <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id="contents">Table of contents</h2>
 
 <!--toc-->