minor and misc. editorial changes

Author: astearns

css3-exclusions/Exclusions.src.html

@@ -134,8 +134,9 @@ <h2 id="definitions">Definitions</h2>
         <span>exclusion area</span> is equivalent to the <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS2/box.html#box-dimensions">
         border box</a>.
         This specification's
-        'shape-outside' property can be used to define arbitrary, non-rectangular exclusion
-        areas.
+        'shape-outside' property 
+        can be used to define arbitrary, 
+        non-rectangular <span>exclusion areas</span>.
     </p>
 
     <dfn>Float area</dfn>
@@ -356,7 +357,7 @@ <h4 id="wrap-flow-property">The 'wrap-flow' property</h4>
 
     <div class="example">
         <p>
-            The 'wrap-flow' property values applied to an absolutely positioned element.
+            The 'wrap-flow' property values applied to a grid item.
         </p>
 <code class="html"><pre>
 
@@ -432,18 +433,28 @@ <h4 id="wrap-flow-property">The 'wrap-flow' property</h4>
 
     <h3 id="scope-and-effect-of-exclusions">Scope and effect of exclusions</h3>
     <p>
-        An <span>exclusion</span> affects the inline flow content descended from the exclusion's containing
-        blocks (defined in <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS2/visudet.html#containing-block-details">
-        CSS 2.1 10.1</a>) and that of all descendant elements of the same containing
-        block. All inline flow content inside the containing block of the exclusions is
-        affected. To stop the effect of exclusions defined outside an element, the 'wrap-through'
-        property can be used (see the <a href="#propagation-of-exclusions">propagation of exclusions</a>
+        An <span>exclusion</span> affects 
+        the inline flow content descended 
+        from the exclusion's containing block 
+        (defined in <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS2/visudet.html#containing-block-details">
+        CSS 2.1 10.1</a>) 
+        and that of all descendant elements 
+        of the same containing block. 
+        All inline flow content 
+        inside the containing block 
+        of the exclusions is affected. 
+        To stop the effect of exclusions 
+        defined outside an element, 
+        the 'wrap-through' property can be used 
+        (see the <a href="#propagation-of-exclusions">propagation of exclusions</a>
         section below).
     </p>
 
     <p>
-        For exclusions with 'position:fixed', the containing block is that of the root 
-        element.
+        As a reminder, 
+        for exclusions with 'position:fixed', 
+        the containing block is that 
+        of the root element.
     </p>
 
     <h4 id="wrap-margin-property">The 'wrap-margin' property</h4>
@@ -1704,7 +1715,6 @@ <h4 id="shape-shorthand-property">The 'shape' Shorthand Property</h4>
     <!-- End section "Shape Shorthand property -->
     <!-- End section "Declaring Shapes" -->
 
-    <p>The shape properties apply to 
     <!-- End section "Shapes" -->
     <h2 id="conformance">Conformance</h2>
     <h3 id="conventions">Document Conventions</h3>

css3-exclusions/Overview.html

@@ -40,14 +40,14 @@
 
    <h1 id=css-exclusions-module>CSS Exclusions and Shapes Module Level 3</h1>
 
-   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=longstatus-date>Editor's Draft 2 August 2012</h2>
+   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=longstatus-date>Editor's Draft 3 August 2012</h2>
 
    <dl>
     <dt>This version:
 
     <dd><a
      href="http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-exclusions/">http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-exclusions/</a></dd>
-    <!--<dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/ED-css3-exclusions-20120802/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-css3-exclusions-20120802/</a></dd>-->
+    <!--<dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/ED-css3-exclusions-20120803/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-css3-exclusions-20120803/</a></dd>-->
 
     <dt>Latest version:
 
@@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ <h2 id=definitions><span class=secno>2. </span>Definitions</h2>
    <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS2/box.html#box-dimensions"> border
    box</a>. This specification's ‘<a href="#shape-outside"><code
    class=property>shape-outside</code></a>’ property can be used to define
-   arbitrary, non-rectangular exclusion areas.
+   arbitrary, non-rectangular <a href="#exclusion-area">exclusion areas</a>.
 
   <p><dfn id=float-area>Float area</dfn>
 
@@ -658,8 +658,8 @@ <h4 id=wrap-flow-property><span class=secno>3.1.1. </span>The ‘<a
 
   <div class=example>
    <p> The ‘<a href="#wrap-flow"><code
-    class=property>wrap-flow</code></a>’ property values applied to an
-    absolutely positioned element.</p>
+    class=property>wrap-flow</code></a>’ property values applied to a grid
+    item.</p>
    <code class=html></code>
    <pre>
 
@@ -755,7 +755,7 @@ <h3 id=scope-and-effect-of-exclusions><span class=secno>3.2. </span>Scope
    and effect of exclusions</h3>
 
   <p> An <span>exclusion</span> affects the inline flow content descended
-   from the exclusion's containing blocks (defined in <a
+   from the exclusion's containing block (defined in <a
    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS2/visudet.html#containing-block-details">
    CSS 2.1 10.1</a>) and that of all descendant elements of the same
    containing block. All inline flow content inside the containing block of
@@ -765,8 +765,9 @@ <h3 id=scope-and-effect-of-exclusions><span class=secno>3.2. </span>Scope
    href="#propagation-of-exclusions">propagation of exclusions</a> section
    below).
 
-  <p> For exclusions with ‘<code class=css>position:fixed</code>’, the
-   containing block is that of the root element.
+  <p> As a reminder, for exclusions with ‘<code
+   class=css>position:fixed</code>’, the containing block is that of the
+   root element.
 
   <h4 id=wrap-margin-property><span class=secno>3.2.1. </span>The ‘<a
    href="#wrap-margin"><code class=property>wrap-margin</code></a>’
@@ -2247,8 +2248,7 @@ <h4 id="shape-shorthand-property">The 'shape' Shorthand Property</h4>
     -->
   <!-- End section "Shape Shorthand property -->
   <!-- End section "Declaring Shapes" -->
-
-  <p>The shape properties apply to <!-- End section "Shapes" -->
+  <!-- End section "Shapes" -->
 
   <h2 id=conformance><span class=secno>5. </span>Conformance</h2>