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of markup documents (e.g. HTML, XML) on various supports, such as screen,
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paper, speech, etc. The Speech module defines aural CSS properties that
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enable authors to declaratively control the rendering of documents via
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speech synthesis, and using optional audio cues. The feature set exposed
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by this specification is designed to match the model described by the
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Speech Synthesis Markup Language (SSML) Version 1.1 <a href="#SSML"
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speech synthesis, and using optional audio cues. Some of the features in
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this specification are conceptually close to functionality described in
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the Speech Synthesis Markup Language (SSML) Version 1.1 <a href="#SSML"
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W3C Patent Policy</a>.</p>
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<p>This is a “last call” working draft, i.e., the working group expects
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<p><span class=issue>TODO: this statement is now obsolete, as this document
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is being updated to include the resolutions from the disposition of
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comments of the Last Call Working Draft.</span>This is a “last call”
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The <strong>deadline for comments</strong> is <strong>30 September
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<p>The CSS Speech module is a community effort and if you would like to
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W3C Recommendation track, please contact <a href="#editors-list">the
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<h2 id=introduction><span class=secno>1. </span>Introduction</h2>
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<p>CSS (Cascading Style Sheets) is a language that describes the rendering of markup documents
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(e.g. HTML, XML) on various supports, such as screen, paper, speech, etc. The Speech module
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defines aural CSS properties that enable authors to declaratively control the rendering of
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documents via speech synthesis, and using optional audio cues. The feature set exposed by this
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specification is designed to match the model described by the Speech Synthesis Markup Language
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(SSML) Version 1.1 [[!SSML]]. Note that this standard was developed in cooperation with the <a
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href="http://www.w3.org/Voice/">Voice Browser Activity</a>.</p>
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documents via speech synthesis, and using optional audio cues. Some of the features in this
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specification are conceptually close to functionality described in the Speech Synthesis Markup
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Language (SSML) Version 1.1 [[!SSML]]. However, the specificities of the CSS model mean that
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compatibility with SSML in terms of syntax and/or semantics is partially enabled. Note that
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this standard was developed in cooperation with the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Voice/">Voice
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