[css-flexbox] Minor editorial <http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-style/2014May/0057.html>

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Author: fantasai

css-flexbox/Overview.bs

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ Previous Version: http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/WD-css3-flexbox-20120322/
 Previous Version: http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-css3-flexbox-20111129/
 Previous Version: http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-css3-flexbox-20110322/
 Previous Version: http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/WD-css3-flexbox-20090723/
-Abstract: The specification describes a CSS box model optimized for user interface design. In the flex layout model, the children of a flex container can be laid out in any direction, and can "flex" their sizes, either growing to fill unused space or shrinking to avoid overflowing the parent. Both horizontal and vertical alignment of the children can be easily manipulated. Nesting of these boxes (horizontal inside vertical, or vertical inside horizontal) can be used to build layouts in two dimensions.
+Abstract: The specification describes a CSS box model optimized for user interface design. In the flex layout model, the children of a flex container can be laid out in any direction, and can “flex” their sizes, either growing to fill unused space or shrinking to avoid overflowing the parent. Both horizontal and vertical alignment of the children can be easily manipulated. Nesting of these boxes (horizontal inside vertical, or vertical inside horizontal) can be used to build layouts in two dimensions.
 Editor: Tab Atkins Jr., Google, http://xanthir.com/contact/
 Editor: fantasai, Mozilla, http://fantasai.inkedblade.net/contact
 Editor: Rossen Atanassov, Microsoft, ratan@microsoft.com
@@ -1297,8 +1297,8 @@ Flex Lines</h2>
 Flexibility</h2>
 
 	<p>
-		The defining aspect of flex layout is the ability to make the <i>flex items</i> "flex",
-		altering their width or height to fill the available space.
+		The defining aspect of flex layout is the ability to make the <i>flex items</i> “flex”,
+		altering their width/height to fill the available space in the <i>main dimension</i>.
 		This is done with the 'flex' property.
 		A flex container distributes free space to its items proportional to their <i>flex grow factor</i>,
 		or shrinks them to prevent overflow proportional to their <i>flex shrink factor</i>.
@@ -2308,8 +2308,8 @@ Cross-Axis Alignment</h3>
 				<li>
 					Otherwise,
 					if the <i>block-start</i> or <i>inline-start</i> margin (whichever is in the cross axis)
-					is <a value for=margin>auto</a>, set it to zero;
-					set the opposite margin so that the outer cross size of the item
+					is <a value for=margin>auto</a>, set it to zero.
+					Set the opposite margin so that the outer cross size of the item
 					equals the cross size of its flex line.
 			</ul>
 

css-flexbox/Overview.html

@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ <h2 class="no-num no-toc no-ref heading settled heading" id=subtitle><span class
 </div>
 
 <h2 class="no-num no-toc no-ref heading settled heading" id=abstract><span class=content>Abstract</span></h2>
-<p class=p-summary data-fill-with=abstract>The specification describes a CSS box model optimized for user interface design. In the flex layout model, the children of a flex container can be laid out in any direction, and can "flex" their sizes, either growing to fill unused space or shrinking to avoid overflowing the parent. Both horizontal and vertical alignment of the children can be easily manipulated. Nesting of these boxes (horizontal inside vertical, or vertical inside horizontal) can be used to build layouts in two dimensions.
+<p class=p-summary data-fill-with=abstract>The specification describes a CSS box model optimized for user interface design. In the flex layout model, the children of a flex container can be laid out in any direction, and can “flex” their sizes, either growing to fill unused space or shrinking to avoid overflowing the parent. Both horizontal and vertical alignment of the children can be easily manipulated. Nesting of these boxes (horizontal inside vertical, or vertical inside horizontal) can be used to build layouts in two dimensions.
 <a href=http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS/>CSS</a> is a language for describing the rendering of structured documents 
 (such as HTML and XML) 
 on screen, on paper, in speech, etc.</p>
@@ -704,7 +704,7 @@ <h2 class="heading settled heading" data-level=4 id=flex-items><span class=secno
 		is wrapped in an anonymous <a data-link-type=dfn href=#flex-item title="flex item">flex item</a>.
 		However, an anonymous flex item that contains only
 		<a href=http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS21/text.html#white-space-prop>white space</a>
-		(i.e. characters that can be affected by the <a class=property data-link-type=propdesc href=http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-text-3/#white-space title=white-space>white-space</a> property)
+		(i.e. characters that can be affected by the <a class=property data-link-type=propdesc href=http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-text-3/#propdef-white-space title=white-space>white-space</a> property)
 		is not rendered, as if it were <span class=css data-link-type=maybe title=display:none>display:none</span>.
 
 	<p>
@@ -1407,8 +1407,8 @@ <h2 class="heading settled heading" data-level=7 id=flexibility><span class=secn
 Flexibility</span><a class=self-link href=#flexibility></a></h2>
 
 	<p>
-		The defining aspect of flex layout is the ability to make the <a data-link-type=dfn href=#flex-item title="flex items">flex items</a> "flex",
-		altering their width or height to fill the available space.
+		The defining aspect of flex layout is the ability to make the <a data-link-type=dfn href=#flex-item title="flex items">flex items</a> “flex”,
+		altering their width/height to fill the available space in the <a data-link-type=dfn href=#main-dimension title="main dimension">main dimension</a>.
 		This is done with the <a class=property data-link-type=propdesc href=#propdef-flex title=flex>flex</a> property.
 		A flex container distributes free space to its items proportional to their <a data-link-type=dfn href=#flex-grow-factor title="flex grow factor">flex grow factor</a>,
 		or shrinks them to prevent overflow proportional to their <a data-link-type=dfn href=#flex-shrink-factor title="flex shrink factor">flex shrink factor</a>.
@@ -2339,8 +2339,8 @@ <h3 class="heading settled heading" data-level=9.6 id=cross-alignment><span clas
 				<li>
 					Otherwise,
 					if the <a data-link-type=dfn href=http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-writing-modes-3/#block-start title=block-start>block-start</a> or <a data-link-type=dfn href=http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-writing-modes-3/#inline-start title=inline-start>inline-start</a> margin (whichever is in the cross axis)
-					is <a class=css-code data-link-for=margin data-link-type=value title=auto>auto</a>, set it to zero;
-					set the opposite margin so that the outer cross size of the item
+					is <a class=css-code data-link-for=margin data-link-type=value title=auto>auto</a>, set it to zero.
+					Set the opposite margin so that the outer cross size of the item
 					equals the cross size of its flex line.
 			</ul>
 
@@ -3338,7 +3338,7 @@ <h3 class="heading settled heading" id=changes-2012><span class=content>
 			<blockquote>
 				<p>However, an anonymous flex item that contains only
 				<a href=http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS21/text.html#white-space-prop>white space</a>
-				<ins>(i.e. characters that can be affected by the <a class=property data-link-type=propdesc href=http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-text-3/#white-space title=white-space>white-space</a> property)</ins>
+				<ins>(i.e. characters that can be affected by the <a class=property data-link-type=propdesc href=http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-text-3/#propdef-white-space title=white-space>white-space</a> property)</ins>
 				is not rendered, as if it were <span class=css data-link-type=maybe title=display:none>display:none</span>.
 			</blockquote>
 		<li id=clarify-2012-table-anon-boxes><a class=self-link href=#clarify-2012-table-anon-boxes></a>

css-flexbox/issues-lc-20140325.txt

@@ -107,6 +107,7 @@ From:    Tab Atkins
 Comment: http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-style/2014May/0046.html
 Note:    This was discussed earlier, see
          http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-style/2012Jun/0029.html
+Comment: http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-style/2014May/0192.html
 Open
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