[css2] Made the title and the H1 more similar.

bert-github · bert-github · commit 0fb7035f3041 · 2003-09-03T12:59:04.000Z
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diff --git a/css2/cover.src b/css2/cover.src
@@ -3,15 +3,15 @@
 
 <html lang="en">
 
-<title>Cascading Style Sheets, Level 2 revision 1</title>
-
+<title>Cascading Style Sheets level 2 revision 1,
+    CSS 2.1 Specification</title>
 
 
 <div class="head">
   <p><a href="http://www.w3.org/"><img alt="W3C" height="48"
     src="http://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" width="72"></a>
 
-  <h1 id="title">Cascading Style Sheets, level 2 revision 1<br>
+  <h1 id="title">Cascading Style Sheets level 2 revision 1<br>
     CSS 2.1 Specification</h1>
   <h2 id="W3C-doctype">W3C _THE_STATUS_ _THE_DATE_</h2>
 
@@ -81,8 +81,8 @@
 <p>This specification defines Cascading Style Sheets, level&nbsp;2
 revision&nbsp;1 (CSS&nbsp;2.1). CSS&nbsp;2.1 is a style sheet language
 that allows
-authors and users to attach style (e.g., fonts, spacing, and aural
-cues) to structured documents (e.g., HTML documents and XML
+authors and users to attach style (e.g., fonts and spacing) to
+structured documents (e.g., HTML documents and XML
 applications). By separating the presentation style of documents from
 the content of documents, CSS&nbsp;2.1 simplifies Web authoring and
 site maintenance.
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ calculation of the 'clip' property), and adds a few highly requested
 features which have already been widely implemented.
 But most of all CSS&nbsp;2.1
 represents a "snapshot" of CSS usage: it consists of all CSS features
-that were implemented interoperably at the date of publication.
+that are implemented interoperably at the date of publication of the Recommendation.
 
 <h2 id=status>Status of this document</h2>
 
@@ -110,7 +110,6 @@ href="http://www.w3.org/Style/Group/">CSS working group</a> (part of
 the <a href="http://www.w3.org/Style/">Style Activity</a>, see <a
 href="http://www.w3.org/Style/Activity">summary</a>).
 
-<!--
 This is a W3C <a
 href="http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process/Process-19991111/tr.html#last-call">Last
 Call Working Draft</a>. "Last call" means that the working group
@@ -120,11 +119,6 @@ working group plans to submit it for consideration as a <a
 href="http://www.w3.org/TR/#About">W3C Candidate Recommendation</a>.
 Comments can be sent until the <strong>30th of August,
 2002.</strong>
--->
-
-<p>The CSS WG is aware that this draft does not yet address all the
-comments raised on the previous draft. The next draft should follow in
-a few weeks and is expected to be the final one.
 
 <p>The (<a
 href="http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-style/">archived</a>)
