rearrange some wording on svg/2003CR values

Author: fantasai

css3-writing-modes/Overview.html

@@ -1239,19 +1239,16 @@ <h4 id=svg-writing-mode><span class=secno>3.1.1. </span> SVG1.1 &lsquo;<a
    &lsquo;<code class=css>lr-tb</code>&rsquo;, &lsquo;<code
    class=css>rl</code>&rsquo;, &lsquo;<code class=css>rl-tb</code>&rsquo;,
    &lsquo;<code class=css>tb</code>&rsquo;, and &lsquo;<code
-   class=css>tb-rl</code>&rsquo;. (These values were also present in <a
-   href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/CR-css3-text-20030514/">an older
-   revision</a> of the CSS &lsquo;<a href="#writing-mode1"><code
-   class=property>writing-mode</code></a>&rsquo; specification.)
+   class=css>tb-rl</code>&rsquo;.
 
   <p>These values are <em>deprecated</em> in any context except SVG1
-   documents. Implementations that wish to support them in the context of CSS
-   must treat these values as follows:
+   documents. Implementations that wish to support these values in the
+   context of CSS must treat them as follows:
 
   <table class=data>
    <thead>
     <tr>
-     <th>SVG1
+     <th>SVG1/Obsolete
 
      <th>CSS
 
@@ -1278,6 +1275,14 @@ <h4 id=svg-writing-mode><span class=secno>3.1.1. </span> SVG1.1 &lsquo;<a
      <td>&lsquo;<code class=css>tb-rl</code>&rsquo;
   </table>
 
+  <p class=note>The SVG1.1 values were also present in an older revision of
+   the CSS &lsquo;<a href="#writing-mode1"><code
+   class=property>writing-mode</code></a>&rsquo; specification, which is
+   obsoleted by this specification. The additional &lsquo;<code
+   class=css>tb-lr</code>&rsquo; value of that revision is replaced by
+   &lsquo;<a href="#vertical-lr"><code
+   class=css>vertical-lr</code></a>&rsquo;.
+
   <p>In SVG1.1, these values set the <dfn
    id=inline-progression-direction>inline progression direction</dfn>, in
    other words, the direction the current text position advances each time a

css3-writing-modes/Overview.src.html

@@ -859,17 +859,15 @@ <h4 id="svg-writing-mode">
 SVG1.1 'writing-mode' Values</h4>
 
   <p>SVG1.1 [[!SVG11]] defines some additional values: ''lr'',
-    ''lr-tb'', ''rl'', ''rl-tb'', ''tb'', and ''tb-rl''. (These values
-    were also present in <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/CR-css3-text-20030514/">an
-    older revision</a> of the CSS 'writing-mode' specification.)
+    ''lr-tb'', ''rl'', ''rl-tb'', ''tb'', and ''tb-rl''.
 
   <p>These values are <em>deprecated</em> in any context except SVG1 documents.
-    Implementations that wish to support them in the context of CSS
-    must treat these values as follows:
+    Implementations that wish to support these values in the context of CSS
+    must treat them as follows:
 
   <table class="data">
     <thead>
-      <tr><th>SVG1</th> <th>CSS</th></tr>
+      <tr><th>SVG1/Obsolete</th> <th>CSS</th></tr>
     </thead>
     <tbody>
       <tr><td>''lr''</td> <td rowspan=3>''horizontal-tb''</td></tr>
@@ -880,6 +878,11 @@ <h4 id="svg-writing-mode">
     </tbody>
   </table>
 
+  <p class="note">The SVG1.1 values were also present in an older revision
+    of the CSS 'writing-mode' specification, which is obsoleted by this
+    specification. The additional ''tb-lr'' value of that revision is
+    replaced by ''vertical-lr''.
+
   <p>In SVG1.1, these values set the <dfn>inline progression
     direction</dfn>, in other words, the direction the current text position
     advances each time a glyph is added. This is a geometric process that