[css2] Small fixes and XML -> XML applications

ianbjacobs · ianbjacobs · commit 1b13d14abebc · 1998-03-21T00:34:43.000Z
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diff --git a/css2/intro.src b/css2/intro.src
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.0 Transitional//EN">
 <html lang="en">
-<!-- $Id: intro.src,v 2.22 1998-03-20 22:38:40 bbos Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Id: intro.src,v 2.23 1998-03-21 00:34:43 ijacobs Exp $ -->
 <HEAD>
 <meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1">
 <TITLE>Introduction to CSS2</TITLE>
@@ -139,14 +139,14 @@ within a block enclosed by curly braces ({...}), and separated by
 semicolons, though the last declaration may also be followed by a
 semicolon.
 
-<P>The first declaration on the 'BODY' element sets
+<P>The first declaration on the BODY element sets
 the font family to "Gill Sans". If that font isn't available, the
 user agent (often referred to as a "browser") will use the
 'sans-serif' font family which is one of five generic font families
 which all users agents know. Child elements of BODY will inherit the
 value of the 'font-family' property.
 
-<P>The second declaration sets the font size of the 'BODY' element to
+<P>The second declaration sets the font size of the BODY element to
 12 points. The "point" unit is commonly used in print-based typography
 to indicate font sizes and other length values. It's an example of an
 absolute unit which does not scale relative to the environment. 
@@ -160,22 +160,13 @@ element are three times wider than the font size.
 
 <!-- Add image, printing, info, positioning, fonts -->
 
-<!-- [commented out to spare newbies from the cruel world out there, -h&kon]
-<div class="note"><P>
-<p><em><strong>Note.</strong> To hide style sheets from older HTML user
-agents, authors may comment out the content of the STYLE element.
-Please consult the HTML 4.0 specification for more information.
-</em>
-</div>
--->
-
-
 <H2>A brief CSS2 tutorial for XML</H2>
 
 <P>CSS can be used with any structured document format, for example
-the eXtensible Markup Language [[-XML10]]. In fact, XML depends more on
-style sheets than HTML, since authors can make up their own elements
-which user agents don't know how to display.
+with applications of the eXtensible Markup Language [[-XML10]]. In
+fact, XML depends more on style sheets than HTML, since authors can
+make up their own elements that user agents don't know how to
+display.
 
 <P>Here is a simple XML fragment:
 
@@ -389,7 +380,8 @@ content will be presented.</P>
 
 <LI>
 <P><STRONG>Complementary to structured documents</STRONG>. Style
-sheets complement structured documents (e.g., HTML and XML), providing
+sheets complement structured documents (e.g., HTML and XML
+applications), providing
 stylistic information for the marked-up text. It should be easy to
 change the style sheet with little or no impact on the markup.</P>
 </LI>
