[css2] Minor editorial changes, removed commented text

ianbjacobs · ianbjacobs · commit 30c2613faddd · 1998-04-09T14:40:35.000Z
--HG--
extra : convert_revision : svn%3A73dc7c4b-06e6-40f3-b4f7-9ed1dbc14bfc/trunk%401480
diff --git a/css2/intro.src b/css2/intro.src
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.0 Transitional//EN">
 <html lang="en">
-<!-- $Id: intro.src,v 2.24 1998-04-06 23:40:46 ijacobs Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Id: intro.src,v 2.25 1998-04-09 14:40:35 ijacobs Exp $ -->
 <HEAD>
 <meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1">
 <TITLE>Introduction to CSS2</TITLE>
@@ -90,9 +90,7 @@ element:</p>
 
 <ul>
 <li> the type of link: to a "stylesheet".
-<li> the location of the style sheet via the href attribute. <!--Here, the file
-<samp>bach.css</samp> is in the same directory as the source HTML
-document. -->
+<li> the location of the style sheet via the "ref" attribute. 
 <li>the type of style sheet being linked: "text/css".
 </ul>
 
@@ -126,8 +124,9 @@ but the second rule overrides the inherited value. In CSS there are
 often such conflicts between different values, and this specification
 describes how to resolve them. 
 
-<P>CSS2 has more than 100 different properties and 'color' is one of
-them. Let's look at some of the others:
+<P>CSS2 has more than 100 different properties, including <span
+class="propinst-color">'color'</span>. Let's look at some of the
+others:
 
 <PRE class="example">
 &lt;!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.0//EN"&gt;
@@ -154,12 +153,12 @@ within a block enclosed by curly braces ({...}), and separated by
 semicolons, though the last declaration may also be followed by a
 semicolon.
 
-<P>The first declaration on the BODY element sets
-the font family to "Gill Sans". If that font isn't available, the
-user agent (often referred to as a "browser") will use the
-'sans-serif' font family which is one of five generic font families
-which all users agents know. Child elements of BODY will inherit the
-value of the 'font-family' property.
+<P>The first declaration on the BODY element sets the font family to
+"Gill Sans". If that font isn't available, the user agent (often
+referred to as a "browser") will use the 'sans-serif' font family
+which is one of five generic font families which all users agents
+know. Child elements of BODY will inherit the value of the <span
+class="propinst-font-family">'font-family'</span> property.
 
 <P>The second declaration sets the font size of the BODY element to
 12 points. The "point" unit is commonly used in print-based typography
@@ -265,8 +264,7 @@ by going through the following steps:</P>
 
 <ol>
 <li>Parse the source document and create a <a
-href="conform.html#doctree">document tree</a> from the source
-document.</li>
+href="conform.html#doctree">document tree</a>.</li>
 
 <li>Identify the target <a href="media.html">media type</a>.
 
@@ -352,7 +350,8 @@ in audio space, but not in time.
 <h3>CSS2 addressing model</h3>
 
 <P> CSS2 <a href="selector.html">selectors</a> and properties allow
-style sheets to refer to the following characteristics of a document:</p>
+style sheets to refer to the following parts of a document
+or user agent:</p>
 
 <ul>
 <li>Elements in the document tree and certain relationships between
@@ -445,7 +444,7 @@ attributes for the elements forming the document body.</P>
 <P><STRONG>Richness</STRONG>. Providing authors with a rich set of
 rendering effects increases the richness of the Web as a medium of
 expression. Designers have been longing for functionality commonly
-found e.g., in desktop publishing and slide-show applications. Some of
+found in desktop publishing and slide-show applications. Some of
 the requested rendering effects conflict with device independence, but
 CSS2 goes a long way toward granting designers their requests.</P>
 </LI>
