Swap around some vocab to see if it's better.

Author: fantasai

css3-text/Overview.html

@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=longstatus-date>Editor's Draft 27 April 2011</h2>
     <dt>This version:
 
     <dd><a href="http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-text/Overview.html">$Date:
-     2011/04/27 01:13:32 $ (CVS $Revision$)</a> <!--
+     2011/04/27 01:29:19 $ (CVS $Revision$)</a> <!--
       <dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-css3-text-20110427/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2011/WD-css3-text-20110427/</a></dd>
     -->
 
@@ -3594,7 +3594,7 @@ <h3 id=text-spacing-prop><span class=secno>9.3. </span> <a
    <dt>
 
    <dd>Turns off all text-spacing features. All fullwidth characters are set
-    with full spacing.
+    with full-width glyphs.
 
    <dt><dfn id=ideograph-alpha
     title="text-spacing:ideograph-alpha">ideograph-alpha</dfn>
@@ -3629,42 +3629,47 @@ <h3 id=text-spacing-prop><span class=secno>9.3. </span> <a
    <dt><dfn id=space-start title="text-spacing:space-start">space-start</dfn>
 
    <dd>Set <a href="#fullwidth-opening-punctuation0"><i>fullwidth opening
-    punctuation</i></a> fully spaced at the start of each line.
+    punctuation</i></a> with full-width glyphs (spaced) at the start of each
+    line.
 
    <dt><dfn id=trim-start title="text-spacing:trim-start">trim-start</dfn>
 
    <dd>Set <a href="#fullwidth-opening-punctuation0"><i>fullwidth opening
-    punctuation</i></a> flush (trim) at the start of each line.
+    punctuation</i></a> with half-width glyphs (flush) at the start of each
+    line.
 
    <dt><dfn id=allow-end title="text-spacing:allow-end">allow-end</dfn>
 
    <dd>Set <a href="#fullwidth-closing-punctuation0"><i>fullwidth closing
-    punctuation</i></a> flush (trim) at the end of each line if it does not
-    otherwise fit prior to justification, otherwise sets the punctuation with
-    full spacing.
+    punctuation</i></a> with half-width glyphs (flush) at the end of each
+    line if it does not otherwise fit prior to justification, otherwise sets
+    the punctuation with full-width glyphs.
 
    <dt><dfn id=space-end title="text-spacing:space-end">space-end</dfn>
 
    <dd>Set <a href="#fullwidth-opening-punctuation0"><i>fullwidth opening
-    punctuation</i></a> fully spaced at the start of each line.
+    punctuation</i></a> with full-width glyphs (spaced) at the start of each
+    line.
 
    <dt><dfn id=trim-end title="text-spacing:trim-end">trim-end</dfn>
 
    <dd>Set <a href="#fullwidth-closing-punctuation0"><i>fullwidth closing
-    punctuation</i></a> flush (trim) at the end of each line.
+    punctuation</i></a> with half-width glyphs (flush) at the end of each
+    line.
 
    <dt><dfn id=space-adjacent
     title="text-spacing:space-adjacent">space-adjacent</dfn>
 
    <dd>Set <a href="#fullwidth-opening-punctuation0"><i>fullwidth opening
-    punctuation</i></a> fully spaced when not at the start of the line. Set
-    <a href="#fullwidth-closing-punctuation0"><i>fullwidth closing
-    punctuation</i></a> fully spaced when not at the end of the line.
+    punctuation</i></a> with full-width glyphs (spaced) when not at the start
+    of the line. Set <a href="#fullwidth-closing-punctuation0"><i>fullwidth
+    closing punctuation</i></a> with full-width glyphs (spaced) when not at
+    the end of the line.
 
    <dt><dfn id=trim-adjacent
     title="text-spacing:trim-adjacent">trim-adjacent</dfn>
 
-   <dd>Collapse spacing between fullwidth punctuation glyphs <a
+   <dd>Collapse spacing between punctuation glyphs <a
     href="#fullwidth-collapsing">as described below</a>.
 
    <dt><dfn id=no-compress title="text-spacing:no-compress">no-compress</dfn>
@@ -3708,23 +3713,23 @@ <h4 id=fullwidth-collapsing><span class=secno>9.3.1. </span> Fullwidth
    punctuation glyphs only take up part of the fullwidth design space. Thus
    such punctuation are not always set fullwidth. Several values of &lsquo;<a
    href="#text-spacing"><code class=property>text-spacing</code></a>&rsquo;
-   allow the author to control when such characters are set trim (at their
-   glyph's width, typically half the width of an ideograph) and when they are
-   set fully spaced.
+   allow the author to control when such characters are set half-width
+   (typically half the width of an ideograph) and when they are set
+   full-width.
 
   <p>In order to set the text as specified, the UA may need to either
 
   <ul>
-   <li>trim (kern) the blank half of the glyphs if they are given fully
-    spaced and must be set trim, or
+   <li>trim (kern) the blank half of the glyphs if they are given full-width
+    and must be set half-width, or
 
-   <li>add space to the glyphs if they are given trim must be set fully
-    spaced
+   <li>add space to the glyphs if they are given half-width must be set
+    full-width.
   </ul>
 
   <p>Some fonts use proportional glyphs for fullwidth punctuation characters.
    For such proportional glyphs, the given advance width is considered
-   simultaneously trim and fully spaced.
+   simultaneously full-width and half-width.
 
   <p class=note>The advance width of a standard Han character can be
    determined either from font metrics such as the OpenType <code>ideo</code>
@@ -3748,25 +3753,25 @@ <h4 id=fullwidth-collapsing><span class=secno>9.3.1. </span> Fullwidth
 
   <ul>
    <li>Set <a href="#fullwidth-opening-punctuation0"><i>fullwidth opening
-    punctuation</i></a> trim if the previous character is a <a
+    punctuation</i></a> half-width if the previous character is a <a
     href="#fullwidth-opening-punctuation0"><i>fullwidth opening
     punctuation</i></a>, <a
     href="#fullwidth-middle-dot-punctuation0"><i>fullwidth middle dot
-    punctuation</i></a>, or ideographic space (U+3000). Else set it fully
-    spaced.
+    punctuation</i></a>, or ideographic space (U+3000). Else set it
+    full-width.
 
    <li>Set <a href="#fullwidth-closing-punctuation0"><i>fullwidth closing
-    punctuation</i></a> trim if the next character is a <a
+    punctuation</i></a> half-width if the next character is a <a
     href="#fullwidth-closing-punctuation0"><i>fullwidth closing
     punctuation</i></a>, <a
     href="#fullwidth-middle-dot-punctuation0"><i>fullwidth middle dot
-    punctuation</i></a>, or ideographic space (U+3000). Else set it at full
-    width.
+    punctuation</i></a>, or ideographic space (U+3000). Else set it
+    full-width.
 
    <li>Set <i>fullwidth closing puntuation</i> followed by <a
     href="#fullwidth-opening-punctuation0"><i>fullwidth opening
-    punctuation</i></a> each "half-spaced", i.e. halfway between trim and
-    fully spaced.
+    punctuation</i></a> each "3/4-width", i.e. halfway between fullw-width
+    and full-width.
   </ul>
 
   <div class=example>

css3-text/Overview.src.html

@@ -2663,7 +2663,7 @@ <h3 id="text-spacing-prop">
           ''space-start allow-end trim-adjacent''.
       <dt><dfn title="text-spacing:none">none</dfn><dt>
         <dd>Turns off all text-spacing features. All fullwidth characters
-          are set with full spacing.
+          are set with full-width glyphs.
       <dt><dfn title="text-spacing:ideograph-alpha">ideograph-alpha</dfn></dt>
         <dd>Creates 1/4em extra spacing between runs of <i>ideographs</i> and
           <i>non-ideographic letters</i>.
@@ -2686,28 +2686,29 @@ <h3 id="text-spacing-prop">
           Otherwise this value has no effect. However future specifications
           may add automatic spacing behavior for other languages.
       <dt><dfn title="text-spacing:space-start">space-start</dfn></dt>
-        <dd>Set <i>fullwidth opening punctuation</i> fully spaced at the start
-          of each line.
+        <dd>Set <i>fullwidth opening punctuation</i> with full-width glyphs
+          (spaced) at the start of each line.
       <dt><dfn title="text-spacing:trim-start">trim-start</dfn></dt>
-        <dd>Set <i>fullwidth opening punctuation</i> flush (trim) at the start
-          of each line.
+        <dd>Set <i>fullwidth opening punctuation</i> with half-width glyphs
+          (flush) at the start of each line.
       <dt><dfn title="text-spacing:allow-end">allow-end</dfn></dt>
-        <dd>Set <i>fullwidth closing punctuation</i> flush (trim) at the end
+        <dd>Set <i>fullwidth closing punctuation</i> with half-width glyphs
+          (flush) at the end
           of each line if it does not otherwise fit prior to justification,
-          otherwise sets the punctuation with full spacing.
+          otherwise sets the punctuation with full-width glyphs.
       <dt><dfn title="text-spacing:space-end">space-end</dfn></dt>
-        <dd>Set <i>fullwidth opening punctuation</i> fully spaced at the start
-          of each line.</dd>
+        <dd>Set <i>fullwidth opening punctuation</i> with full-width glyphs
+          (spaced) at the start of each line.</dd>
       <dt><dfn title="text-spacing:trim-end">trim-end</dfn></dt>
-        <dd>Set <i>fullwidth closing punctuation</i> flush (trim) at the end
-          of each line.</dd>
+        <dd>Set <i>fullwidth closing punctuation</i> with half-width glyphs
+          (flush) at the end of each line.</dd>
       <dt><dfn title="text-spacing:space-adjacent">space-adjacent</dfn></dt>
-        <dd>Set <i>fullwidth opening punctuation</i> fully spaced when not at
-          the start of the line.
-          Set <i>fullwidth closing punctuation</i> fully spaced when not at
-          the end of the line.
+        <dd>Set <i>fullwidth opening punctuation</i> with full-width glyphs
+          (spaced) when not at the start of the line.
+          Set <i>fullwidth closing punctuation</i> with full-width glyphs
+          (spaced) when not at the end of the line.
       <dt><dfn title="text-spacing:trim-adjacent">trim-adjacent</dfn></dt>
-        <dd>Collapse spacing between fullwidth punctuation glyphs
+        <dd>Collapse spacing between punctuation glyphs
           <a href="#fullwidth-collapsing">as described below</a>.
       <dt><dfn title="text-spacing:no-compress">no-compress</dfn></dt>
         <dd>Justification may not compress text-spacing. (If this value is not
@@ -2743,22 +2744,22 @@ <h4 id="fullwidth-collapsing">
     <p>Typically fullwidth characters have glyphs with the same advance width
       as a standard Han character (e.g. 水 U+6C34). However, many fullwidth
       punctuation glyphs only take up part of the fullwidth design space.
-      Thus  such punctuation are not always set fullwidth. Several values of
+      Thus such punctuation are not always set fullwidth. Several values of
       'text-spacing' allow the author to control when such characters are
-      set trim (at their glyph's width, typically half the width of an
-      ideograph) and when they are set fully spaced.
+      set half-width (typically half the width of an ideograph) and when
+      they are set full-width.
 
     <p>In order to set the text as specified, the UA may need to either
       <ul>
         <li>trim (kern) the blank half of the glyphs if they are given
-          fully spaced and must be set trim, or
-        <li>add space to the glyphs if they are given trim must be set
-          fully spaced
+          full-width and must be set half-width, or
+        <li>add space to the glyphs if they are given half-width must be set
+          full-width.
       </ul>
 
     <p>Some fonts use proportional glyphs for fullwidth punctuation characters.
       For such proportional glyphs, the given advance width is considered
-      simultaneously trim and fully spaced.
+      simultaneously full-width and half-width.
 
     <p class="note">The advance width of a standard Han character can be
       determined either from font metrics such as the OpenType <code>ideo</code>
@@ -2777,16 +2778,15 @@ <h4 id="fullwidth-collapsing">
       font has proportional fullwidth punctuation glyphs), the UA
       must collapse the space typically associated with such full width
       glyphs as follows:
-      <li>Set <i>fullwidth opening punctuation</i> trim if the previous
+      <li>Set <i>fullwidth opening punctuation</i> half-width if the previous
         character is a <i>fullwidth opening punctuation</i>, <i>fullwidth middle dot
-        punctuation</i>, or ideographic space (U+3000). Else set it fully spaced.
-      <li>Set <i>fullwidth closing punctuation</i> trim if the next
+        punctuation</i>, or ideographic space (U+3000). Else set it full-width.
+      <li>Set <i>fullwidth closing punctuation</i> half-width if the next
         character is a <i>fullwidth closing punctuation</i>, <i>fullwidth middle dot
-        punctuation</i>, or ideographic space (U+3000). Else set it at full
-        width.
+        punctuation</i>, or ideographic space (U+3000). Else set it full-width.
       <li>Set <i>fullwidth closing puntuation</i> followed by <i>fullwidth opening
-        punctuation</i> each "half-spaced", i.e. halfway between trim and fully
-        spaced.
+        punctuation</i> each "3/4-width", i.e. halfway between fullw-width and
+        full-width.
     </ul>
 
     <div class="example">