[css-view-transitions-1][editorial] Minor wording tweaks and markup fixes

Author: fantasai

css-view-transitions-1/Overview.bs

@@ -1092,7 +1092,7 @@ urlPrefix: https://wicg.github.io/navigation-api/; type: interface;
 		:: A boolean. Initially false.
 
 			When this is true, [=this=]'s [=active view transition=]'s [=ViewTransition/transition root pseudo-element=] renders as a child of [=this=]'s [=document element=],
-			and [=this=]'s [=document element=] is its [=originating element=].
+			with [=this=]'s [=document element=] is its [=originating element=].
 
 			Note: The position of the [=ViewTransition/transition root pseudo-element=] within the [=document element=] does not matter, as the [=ViewTransition/transition root pseudo-element=]'s [=containing block=] is the [=snapshot containing block=].
 	</dl>
@@ -1179,7 +1179,7 @@ urlPrefix: https://wicg.github.io/navigation-api/; type: interface;
 		1. If |document|'s [=document/active view transition=] is not null, then:
 
 			1. If |document|'s [=document/active view transition=]'s [=ViewTransition/phase=] is "`pending-capture`",
-				then [=setup view transition=] with |document|'s [=document/active view transition=].
+				then [=setup view transition=] for |document|'s [=document/active view transition=].
 
 			1. Otherwise, if |document|'s [=document/active view transition=]'s [=ViewTransition/phase=] is "`animating`",
 				then [=handle transition frame=] for |document|'s [=document/active view transition=].
@@ -1188,7 +1188,7 @@ urlPrefix: https://wicg.github.io/navigation-api/; type: interface;
 ## [=Setup view transition=] ## {#setup-view-transition-algorithm}
 
 	<div algorithm>
-		To <dfn>setup view transition</dfn> given a {{ViewTransition}} |transition|,
+		To <dfn>setup view transition</dfn> for a {{ViewTransition}} |transition|,
 			perform the following steps:
 
 		Note: This algorithm captures the current state of the document,
@@ -1330,9 +1330,9 @@ urlPrefix: https://wicg.github.io/navigation-api/; type: interface;
 				|element|'s [=border box=] from the [=snapshot containing block origin=] to its
 				current visual position.
 
-			1. Set |capture|'s [=captured element/old writing-mode] to the [=computed value=] of 'writing-mode' on |element|.
+			1. Set |capture|'s [=captured element/old writing-mode=] to the [=computed value=] of 'writing-mode' on |element|.
 
-			1. Set |capture|'s [=captured element/old direction] to the [=computed value=] of 'direction' on |element|.
+			1. Set |capture|'s [=captured element/old direction=] to the [=computed value=] of 'direction' on |element|.
 
 			1. Set |namedElements|[|transitionName|] to |capture|.
 	</div>
@@ -1400,7 +1400,8 @@ urlPrefix: https://wicg.github.io/navigation-api/; type: interface;
 
 				1. Let |old| be a new ''::view-transition-old()'',
 					with its [=view transition name=] set to |transitionName|,
-					displaying |capturedElement|'s [=captured element/old image=].
+					displaying |capturedElement|'s [=captured element/old image=]
+					as its [=replaced element|replaced=] content.
 
 				1. Append |old| to |imagePair|.
 
@@ -1416,7 +1417,7 @@ urlPrefix: https://wicg.github.io/navigation-api/; type: interface;
 				The [=new element=] and its contents
 				(the flat tree descendants of the element, including both text and elements, or the replaced content of a replaced element),
 				except the |transition|'s [=ViewTransition/transition root pseudo-element=]'s [=tree/inclusive descendants=],
-				are not painted (as if they had visibility: hidden)
+				are not painted (as if they had ''visibility: hidden'')
 				and do not respond to hit-testing (as if they had pointer-events: none) until |new| exists.
 
 			1. If both of |capturedElement|'s [=captured element/old image=] and [=captured element/new element=]
@@ -1481,7 +1482,10 @@ urlPrefix: https://wicg.github.io/navigation-api/; type: interface;
 
 					Note: The above code example contains variables to be replaced.
 
-					Note: ''mix-blend-mode: plus-lighter'' ensures that the blending of identical pixels from the old and new images results in the same color value as those pixels, and achieves a "correct" cross-fade.
+					Note: ''mix-blend-mode: plus-lighter'' ensures
+					that the blending of identical pixels from the old and new images
+					results in the same color value as those pixels,
+					and achieves a “correct” cross-fade.
 	</div>
 
 ## [=Call the update callback=] ## {#call-dom-update-callback-algorithm}
@@ -1557,7 +1561,7 @@ urlPrefix: https://wicg.github.io/navigation-api/; type: interface;
 
 		1. If |element| is the [=document element=], then:
 
-			1. Render the region of the |element| and the [/=document=]'s [=Document/top layer=] that intersects the [=snapshot containing block=],
+			1. Render the region of the |element| and the [=/document=]'s [=Document/top layer=] that intersects the [=snapshot containing block=],
 				on a transparent canvas the size of the [=snapshot containing block=],
 				following the [=capture rendering characteristics=], and these additional characteristics: