[css2] Minor changes based on msg0017

ianbjacobs · ianbjacobs · commit 5a0362827bfb · 1998-02-07T01:59:54.000Z
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diff --git a/css2/aural.src b/css2/aural.src
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.0 Transitional//EN">
 <html lang="en">
-<!-- $Id: aural.src,v 2.0 1998-02-02 18:43:28 bbos Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Id: aural.src,v 2.1 1998-02-07 01:59:54 ijacobs Exp $ -->
 <HEAD>
 <meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1">
 <TITLE>Aural style sheets</TITLE>
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 
 <p>The aural rendering of a document, already commonly used by the
 blind and print-impaired communities, combines speech synthesis and
-<span class="index-def" title="audio icon">"audio icons"</span> Often
+<span class="index-def" title="auditory icon">"auditory icons"</span> Often
 such aural presentation occurs by converting the document to plain
 text and feeding this to a <span class="index-def" title="screen
 reader"><dfn>screen reader</dfn></span> -- software or hardware that
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ aural alternative to visual presentation.
 <p>Besides the obvious accessibility advantages, there are other large
 markets for aural presentation, including in-car use, industrial and
 medical documentation systems (intranets), home entertainment, and to
-help illiterate users.
+help users learning to read or who have difficulty reading.
 
 <!-- Talk about aural canvas here. Space, time, frequency, etc. -IJ
 -->
@@ -211,9 +211,9 @@ delimit it. Values have the following meanings:</p>
 
 <dl>
 <dt><span class="index-inst" title="&lt;uri&gt;"><span class="value-inst-uri"><strong>&lt;uri&gt;</strong></span></span>
-<dd> The URI designates an audio icon resource.
+<dd> The URI designates an auditory icon resource.
 <dt><strong>none</strong>
-<dd> No audio icon is specified.
+<dd> No auditory icon is specified.
 </dl>
 
 <div class="example"><P>
@@ -242,8 +242,8 @@ The following two rules are equivalent:
 </pre>
 </div>
 
-<!-- What do UAs do when the audio icon is not found
-or they cannot render the audio icon? -IJ -->
+<!-- What do UAs do when the auditory icon is not found
+or they cannot render the auditory icon? -IJ -->
 
 
 <H2><a name="mixing-props">Mixing properties</a>: <span
@@ -438,7 +438,7 @@ class="propinst-voice-family">'voice-family'</span>,
 
 <P>This property specifies the speaking rate. Note that both absolute
 and relative keyword values are allowed (compare with <span
-class="propinst-font-weight">'font-weight'</span>). Values have
+class="propinst-font-size">'font-size'</span>). Values have
 the following meanings:</p>
 
 <dl>
