[css2] General edit

ianbjacobs · ianbjacobs · commit a036d8f3558c · 1998-01-29T00:47:00.000Z
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diff --git a/css2/ui.src b/css2/ui.src
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.0 Transitional//EN">
 <html lang="en">
-<!-- $Id: ui.src,v 1.23 1998-01-28 06:45:18 ijacobs Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Id: ui.src,v 1.24 1998-01-29 00:47:00 ijacobs Exp $ -->
 <HEAD>
 <meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1">
 <TITLE>User interface</TITLE>
@@ -10,21 +10,21 @@
 </HEAD>
 <BODY>
 <H1 align="center">User interface</H1>
-<H2><a name="cursor-props">Cursors</a> the <span
+<H2><a name="cursor-props">Cursors:</a> the <span
 class="propinst-cursor">'cursor'</span> property</H2>
 
 <!-- #include src=properties/cursor.srb -->
 
 <P>This property specifies the type of cursor to be displayed for the
-	mouse pointer. [not necessarily a mouse? -howcome] The values have the following meanings:
+	pointing device. Values have the following meanings:
 
 <dl>
 <dt><strong>auto</strong>
 <dd>The UA determines the cursor to display based on the current
 context.
 
 <dt><strong>crosshair</strong>
-<dd>A simple crosshair
+<dd>A simple crosshair (e.g., short line segments resembling a "+" sign).
 
 <dt><strong>default</strong>
 <dd>The platform-dependent default cursor. Often rendered as an arrow.
@@ -71,9 +71,9 @@ P { cursor : text url(mything.cur) }
 <H2><a name="system-colors">User preferences for colors</a></H2>
 
 <p>In addition to being able to assign pre-defined color values to
-text, backgrounds, etc. CSS2 allows authors to specify colors in a
+text, backgrounds, etc., CSS2 allows authors to specify colors in a
 manner that integrates them into the user's graphic environment. For
-instance, color blind users may have their environment configured to
+instance, color-blind users may have their environment configured to
 avoid specific colors. Style rules that take into account user
 preferences thus offer the following advantages:
 	
@@ -83,10 +83,10 @@ preferences thus offer the following advantages:
 settings may be related to a disability.</li>
 </ol>
 
-<p>The set of values defined for system colors is intended to
-be exhaustive. For systems that do not expose a corresponding
-value, it should be mapped to the nearest system attribute, or to
-a default color.</p>
+<p>The set of values defined for system colors is intended to be
+exhaustive. For systems that do not have a corresponding value, the
+specified value should be mapped to the nearest system attribute, or
+to a default color.</p>
 
 <p>The following lists additional values for color related CSS
 attributes and their general meaning. Any color property (e.g., <span
@@ -168,9 +168,9 @@ P { color: windowtext; background-color: window }
 
 <H2><a name="system-fonts">User preferences for fonts</a></H2>
 
-<P>The <span class="propinst-font">'font'</span> property allows
-authors to specify fonts available in the user's own graphical
-environment.  Please consult this property for details.
+<P>As for colors, authors may specify fonts in a way that makes use of
+a user's system resources. Please consult the <span
+class="propinst-font">'font'</span> property for details.
 
 <H2>Other rendering issues that depend on user agents</H2>
 
