[CSS2] reword some of the 2.2 abstract

this moves away from Bert's original text

Author: gsnedders

css2/cover.html

@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
   <p><a href="http://www.w3.org/"><img alt="W3C" height="48"
     src="http://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" width="72"></a>
 
-  <h1 id="title">Cascading Style Sheets Level 2 Revision 1 (CSS&nbsp;2.1) Specification</h1>
+  <h1 id="title">Cascading Style Sheets Level 2 Revision 2 (CSS&nbsp;2.2) Specification</h1>
   <h2 id="W3C-doctype">W3C Editors Draft 25 April 2018</h2>
 
   <dl>
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ <h2 id="W3C-doctype">W3C Editors Draft 25 April 2018</h2>
 
 <h2 id=abstract>Abstract</h2> 
 
-<p>This specification defines Cascading Style Sheets level&nbsp;2
+<p>This specification defines Cascading Style Sheets level&nbsp;2 (CSS&nbsp;2)
 revision&nbsp;2 (CSS&nbsp;2.2). CSS is a style sheet language
 that allows
 authors and users to attach style (e.g., fonts and spacing) to
@@ -112,26 +112,23 @@ <h2 id=abstract>Abstract</h2>
 the content of documents, CSS simplifies Web authoring and
 site maintenance.
 
-<P>CSS&nbsp;2.2 is the second revision of CSS level&nbsp;2 <a href="refs.html#ref-CSS2" rel="biblioentry" class="noxref"><span class="informref">[CSS2]</span></a>. It
-corrects a few errors in CSS&nbsp;2.1, the first revision of CSS
-level&nbsp;2.
-
 <p>
 It supports media-specific style sheets so that authors may tailor the
 presentation of their documents to visual browsers, aural devices,
 printers, braille devices, handheld devices, etc. It also supports
 content positioning, table layout, features for internationalization
 and some properties related to user interface.
 
-<p>CSS&nbsp;2.2 is derived from and is intended to replace
-CSS&nbsp;2.1 and CSS2. Some
-parts of CSS2 are unchanged in CSS&nbsp;2.2, some parts have been
-altered, and some parts removed. The removed portions may be used in a
-future CSS3 specification. Future specs should refer to CSS&nbsp;2.2
-(unless they need features from CSS2 which have been dropped in
-CSS&nbsp;2.2, and then they should only reference CSS2 for those
-features, or preferably reference such feature(s) in the respective
-CSS3 Module that includes those feature(s)).
+<p>CSS&nbsp;2.2 is derived from and is intended to replace the
+CSS&nbsp;2.1 and original CSS2
+specifications. See <a href="changes.html">appendix C of this
+document</a> for changes from CSS&nbsp;2.1,
+and <a href="/TR/2011/REC-CSS21-2011-06-07/changes.html">appendix C of
+CSS&nbsp;2.1 for changes from CSS2</a> (noting that certain CSS2 features
+were removed from CSS level 2 in CSS&nbsp2.1). All future
+specifications should refer to CSS&nbsp;2.2 when referring to CSS
+level 2; if they wish to reference features from CSS2 dropped in later
+revisions they should reference the latest applicable CSS module.
 
 <h2 id=status>Status of this document</h2>
 

css2/cover.src

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
   <p><a href="http://www.w3.org/"><img alt="W3C" height="48"
     src="http://www.w3.org/Icons/w3c_home" width="72"></a>
 
-  <h1 id="title">Cascading Style Sheets Level 2 Revision 1 (CSS&nbsp;2.1) Specification</h1>
+  <h1 id="title">Cascading Style Sheets Level 2 Revision 2 (CSS&nbsp;2.2) Specification</h1>
   <h2 id="W3C-doctype">W3C _THE_STATUSNAME_ _THE_DATE_</h2>
 
   <dl>
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
 
 <h2 id=abstract>Abstract</h2> 
 
-<p>This specification defines Cascading Style Sheets level&nbsp;2
+<p>This specification defines Cascading Style Sheets level&nbsp;2 (CSS&nbsp;2)
 revision&nbsp;2 (CSS&nbsp;2.2). CSS is a style sheet language
 that allows
 authors and users to attach style (e.g., fonts and spacing) to
@@ -97,26 +97,23 @@ applications). By separating the presentation style of documents from
 the content of documents, CSS simplifies Web authoring and
 site maintenance.
 
-<P>CSS&nbsp;2.2 is the second revision of CSS level&nbsp;2 [[-CSS2]]. It
-corrects a few errors in CSS&nbsp;2.1, the first revision of CSS
-level&nbsp;2.
-
 <p>
 It supports media-specific style sheets so that authors may tailor the
 presentation of their documents to visual browsers, aural devices,
 printers, braille devices, handheld devices, etc. It also supports
 content positioning, table layout, features for internationalization
 and some properties related to user interface.
 
-<p>CSS&nbsp;2.2 is derived from and is intended to replace
-CSS&nbsp;2.1 and CSS2. Some
-parts of CSS2 are unchanged in CSS&nbsp;2.2, some parts have been
-altered, and some parts removed. The removed portions may be used in a
-future CSS3 specification. Future specs should refer to CSS&nbsp;2.2
-(unless they need features from CSS2 which have been dropped in
-CSS&nbsp;2.2, and then they should only reference CSS2 for those
-features, or preferably reference such feature(s) in the respective
-CSS3 Module that includes those feature(s)).
+<p>CSS&nbsp;2.2 is derived from and is intended to replace the
+CSS&nbsp;2.1 and original CSS2
+specifications. See <a href="changes.html">appendix C of this
+document</a> for changes from CSS&nbsp;2.1,
+and <a href="/TR/2011/REC-CSS21-2011-06-07/changes.html">appendix C of
+CSS&nbsp;2.1 for changes from CSS2</a> (noting that certain CSS2 features
+were removed from CSS level 2 in CSS&nbsp2.1). All future
+specifications should refer to CSS&nbsp;2.2 when referring to CSS
+level 2; if they wish to reference features from CSS2 dropped in later
+revisions they should reference the latest applicable CSS module.
 
 <h2 id=status>Status of this document</h2>