[css-text] White Space Processing Details editorial change <http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-style/2013Nov/0089.html>

Author: kojiishi

css-text/Overview.html

@@ -910,10 +910,10 @@ <h2 id=white-space-processing><span class=secno>4. </span> White Space
    property.
 
   <p id=segment-normalization> CSS does not define document segmentation
-   rules. Segments could be separated by a particular newline seqence (such
-   as a line feed or CRLF pair), or delimited by some other mechanism, such
-   as the SGML <code>RECORD-START</code> and <code>RECORD-END</code> tokens.
-   For CSS processing, each document language–defined segment break, CRLF
+   rules. Segments can be separated by a particular newline seqence (such as
+   a line feed or CRLF pair), or delimited by some other mechanism, such as
+   the SGML <code>RECORD-START</code> and <code>RECORD-END</code> tokens. For
+   CSS processing, each document language–defined segment break, CRLF
    sequence (U+000D U+000A), carriage return (U+000D), and line feed (U+000A)
    in the text is treated as a <dfn id=segment-break>segment break</dfn>,
    which is then interpreted for rendering as specified by the ‘<a

css-text/Overview.src.html

@@ -583,7 +583,7 @@ <h2 id="white-space-processing">
   <p>White space processing in CSS is controlled with the 'white-space' property.
 
   <p id="segment-normalization">
-    CSS does not define document segmentation rules. Segments could be
+    CSS does not define document segmentation rules. Segments can be
     separated by a particular newline seqence (such as a line feed or
     CRLF pair), or delimited by some other mechanism, such as the SGML
     <code>RECORD-START</code> and <code>RECORD-END</code> tokens.

css-text/issues-lc-2013.txt

@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ Comment:  http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-style/2013Nov/0106.html
 Closed:   Accepted
 ----
 Issue 8.
-Summary:  White Space Processing Details editorial change
+Summary:  White Space Processing Details editorial changes
 From:     CE Whitehead
 Comment:  http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-style/2013Nov/0089.html
 Closed:   Accepted