[css-shapes] one more serialization tweak

astearns · astearns · commit d476d71a36c5 · 2014-02-05T15:35:31.000-08:00
diff --git a/css-shapes/Overview.html b/css-shapes/Overview.html
@@ -611,7 +611,6 @@ <h3 class="heading settled heading" data-level=3.3 id=basic-shape-serialization>
 
 <p>	The <a class="production css-code" data-link-type=type href=http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-values-3/#position-value title="<position>">&lt;position&gt;</a> values in <a class=css data-link-type=maybe href=#funcdef-ellipse title=ellipse()>ellipse()</a> and <a class=css data-link-type=maybe href=#funcdef-circle title=circle()>circle()</a> 
 	serialize to their 2- and 4-value forms only, 
-	normalized to their computed values (as above),
 	preferring the 2-value form 
 	when it can be expressed without calc(), 
 	preferring left and top origins,  
@@ -620,7 +619,7 @@ <h3 class="heading settled heading" data-level=3.3 id=basic-shape-serialization>
 <div class=example>
 
 
-<p>	Normalizing <a class="production css-code" data-link-type=type href=http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-values-3/#position-value title="<position>">&lt;position&gt;</a> to its computed value (and omitting components such as zero length offsets) means that keywords without an offset turn into percentages.
+<p>	Since <a class="production css-code" data-link-type=type href=http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-values-3/#position-value title="<position>">&lt;position&gt;</a> keywords stand in for percentages, keywords without an offset turn into percentages.
 
 	<pre><code class=css>
   circle(at left bottom) 
@@ -644,11 +643,11 @@ <h3 class="heading settled heading" data-level=3.3 id=basic-shape-serialization>
 <p>	Avoiding calc() expressions means that some <a class="production css-code" data-link-type=type href=http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-values-3/#position-value title="<position>">&lt;position&gt;</a> values that could be simplified to the 2-value form must be serialized in 4-value form instead.
 
 	<pre><code class=css>
-  circle(at right 5% bottom 10px) 
+  circle(at right 5px bottom 10px) 
 
-  serializes as "circle(at right 5% bottom 10px)"
+  serializes as "circle(at right 5px bottom 10px)"
 
-  not as "circle(at 95% calc(100% - 10px))"
+  not as "circle(at calc(100% - 5px) calc(100% - 10px))"
 </code></pre>
 <p>	Avoiding calc() transformations means that if a specified (or computed) calc() must stay in calc() form, it will be used as-is, not reformulated with a different origin or reduced.
 
diff --git a/css-shapes/Overview.src.html b/css-shapes/Overview.src.html
@@ -487,7 +487,6 @@ <h3 id='basic-shape-serialization'>
 
 	The <<position>> values in ''ellipse()'' and ''circle()'' 
 	serialize to their 2- and 4-value forms only, 
-	normalized to their computed values (as above),
 	preferring the 2-value form 
 	when it can be expressed without calc(), 
 	preferring left and top origins,  
@@ -496,7 +495,7 @@ <h3 id='basic-shape-serialization'>
 <div class="example">
 
 
-	Normalizing <<position>> to its computed value (and omitting components such as zero length offsets) means that keywords without an offset turn into percentages.
+	Since <<position>> keywords stand in for percentages, keywords without an offset turn into percentages.
 
 	<pre><code class="css">
 		circle(at left bottom) 
@@ -523,11 +522,11 @@ <h3 id='basic-shape-serialization'>
 	Avoiding calc() expressions means that some <<position>> values that could be simplified to the 2-value form must be serialized in 4-value form instead.
 
 	<pre><code class="css">
-		circle(at right 5% bottom 10px) 
+		circle(at right 5px bottom 10px) 
 
-		serializes as "circle(at right 5% bottom 10px)"
+		serializes as "circle(at right 5px bottom 10px)"
 
-		not as "circle(at 95% calc(100% - 10px))"
+		not as "circle(at calc(100% - 5px) calc(100% - 10px))"
 	</code></pre>
 
 	Avoiding calc() transformations means that if a specified (or computed) calc() must stay in calc() form, it will be used as-is, not reformulated with a different origin or reduced.
