[css-values] Minor wording clean-up.

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Author: fantasai

css-values/Overview.html

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
    rel=dcterms.rights>
   <meta content="CSS Values and Units Module Level 3" name=dcterms.title>
   <meta content=text name=dcterms.type>
-  <meta content=2014-03-07 name=dcterms.date>
+  <meta content=2014-03-08 name=dcterms.date>
   <meta content="Håkon Wium Lie" name=dcterms.creator>
   <meta content="Tab Atkins" name=dcterms.creator>
   <meta content="Elika J. Etemad" name=dcterms.creator>
@@ -42,11 +42,11 @@
    <h1 class=p-name>CSS Values and Units Module Level 3</h1>
 
    <h2 class="no-num no-toc">Editor's Draft <span class=dt-updated><span
-    class=value title=20140307> 7 March 2014</span></span></h2>
+    class=value title=20140308> 8 March 2014</span></span></h2>
 
    <dl>
     <dt>This version:</dt>
-    <!--<dd><a class="u-url" href="http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-values/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/CR-css3-values-20140307/</a></dd>-->
+    <!--<dd><a class="u-url" href="http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-values/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2014/CR-css3-values-20140308/</a></dd>-->
 
     <dd><a class=u-url
      href="http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-values/">http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-values/</a>
@@ -452,8 +452,8 @@ <h3 id=component-combinators><span class=secno>2.2. </span> Component value
   <p>Component values can be arranged into property values as follows:
 
   <ul>
-   <li>Several juxtaposed words mean that all of them must occur, in the
-    given order.
+   <li>Juxtaposing components means that all of them must occur, in the given
+    order.
 
    <li>A double ampersand (&&) separates two or more components, all of which
     must occur, in any order.
@@ -502,7 +502,8 @@ <h3 id=component-multipliers><span class=secno>2.3. </span> Component value
     of repetitions.
 
    <li>A hash mark (#) indicates that the preceding type, word, or group
-    occurs one or more times, separated by comma tokens. It may optionally be
+    occurs one or more times, separated by comma tokens (which may optionally
+    be surrounded by white space and/or comments). It may optionally be
     followed by the curly brace forms, above, to indicate precisely how many
     times the repetition occurs, like ‘<code
     class=css>&lt;length>#{1,4}</code>’.
@@ -518,9 +519,7 @@ <h3 id=component-whitespace><span class=secno>2.4. </span> Component values
    and white space</h3>
 
   <p>Unless otherwise specified, white space and/or comments may appear
-   before, after, and/or between components in a property value or
-   subcomponents in a <a href="#functional-notation">functional notation</a>
-   that is defined using these component <a
+   before, after, and/or between components combined using the above <a
    href="#component-combinators">combinators</a> and <a
    href="#component-multipliers">multipliers</a>.
 
@@ -2378,6 +2377,12 @@ <h2 class=no-num id=changes>Changes</h2>
     isn't as simple.
 
    <li>Clarified relative URL resolution for embedded style sheets.
+
+   <li>Clarified {<var>A</var>} variant of {<var>A</var>,<var>B</var>}
+    notation.
+
+   <li>Added notation for restricting the length of comma-separated lists
+    specified with the ‘<code class=css>#</code>’ notation.
   </ul>
 
   <p>Changes since the <a

css-values/Overview.src.html

@@ -188,8 +188,8 @@ <h3 id="component-combinators">
 	<p>Component values can be arranged into property values as follows:
 
 	<ul>
-		<li>Several juxtaposed words mean that all of them must occur, in the
-			given order.
+		<li>Juxtaposing components means that
+			all of them must occur, in the given order.
 		<li>A double ampersand (&&) separates two or more components,
 			all of which must occur, in any order.
 		<li>A double bar (||) separates two or more options:
@@ -233,7 +233,8 @@ <h3 id="component-multipliers">
 			with no upper bound on the number of repetitions.
 
 		<li>A hash mark (#) indicates that the preceding type, word, or
-			group occurs one or more times, separated by comma tokens.
+			group occurs one or more times, separated by comma tokens
+			(which may optionally be surrounded by white space and/or comments).
 			It may optionally be followed by the curly brace forms, above,
 			to indicate precisely how many times the repetition occurs,
 			like ''&lt;length>#{1,4}''.
@@ -246,9 +247,7 @@ <h3 id="component-whitespace">
 
 	<p>Unless otherwise specified,
 	white space and/or comments may appear before, after, and/or between
-	components in a property value
-	or subcomponents in a <a href="#functional-notation">functional notation</a>
-	that is defined using these component
+	components combined using the above
 	<a href="#component-combinators">combinators</a> and
 	<a href="#component-multipliers">multipliers</a>.
 
@@ -1856,6 +1855,9 @@ <h2 class="no-num" id="changes">Changes</h2>
         Require specs referencing it to be clear about excluded keywords,
         because the new rule isn't as simple.
     <li>Clarified relative URL resolution for embedded style sheets.
+    <li>Clarified {<var>A</var>} variant of {<var>A</var>,<var>B</var>} notation.
+    <li>Added notation for restricting the length of comma-separated lists
+        specified with the ''#'' notation.
   </ul>
 
   <p>Changes since the <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2012/CR-css3-values-20120828/">28 August 2012 Candidate Recommendation</a> are:

css-values/issues-cr-2013.txt

@@ -41,3 +41,8 @@ Response: http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-style/2014Mar/0127.html
 Closed:   Accepted
 Verified: 
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+Issue 6.
+Summary:  Add notation for restricting length of #-multiplied lists
+From:     ?
+Closed:   Accepted
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