address 3 out of 4 editorial issues raised on www-style

Author: annevk

css3-mediaqueries/Overview.html

@@ -24,13 +24,13 @@
 
    <h1 id=media-queries>Media Queries</h1>
 
-   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=w3c-working>Editor's Draft 20 April 2009</h2>
+   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=w3c-working>Editor's Draft 31 July 2009</h2>
 
    <dl>
     <dt>This Version:
 
     <dd><a
-     href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/ED-css3-mediaqueries-20090420/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/ED-css3-mediaqueries-20090420/</a>
+     href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/ED-css3-mediaqueries-20090731/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/ED-css3-mediaqueries-20090731/</a>
 
     <dt>Latest Version:
 
@@ -378,6 +378,12 @@ <h2 id=media0><span class=secno>2 </span>Media Queries</h2>
    id=media-features>media features</span>. If the media type is omitted it
    is assumed to be &lsquo;<code class=css>all</code>&rsquo;.
 
+  <p>Statements regarding media queries in this section assume the <a
+   href="#syntax">syntax section</a> is followed. Media queries that do not
+   conform to the syntax are discussed in the <a href="#error-handling">error
+   handling section</a>. I.e. the syntax takes precedence over requirements
+   in this section.
+
   <div class=example>
    <p>Here is a simple example written in HTML:</p>
 
@@ -622,10 +628,8 @@ <h3 id=error-handling><span class=secno>3.1 </span>Error Handling</h3>
   <ul>
    <li>
     <p><strong>Unknown media types.</strong> Unknown media types evaluate to
-     false, unless negated by the &lsquo;<code class=css>not</code>&rsquo;
-     keyword, in which case they evaluate to true. Effectively, they are
-     treated identically to known media types that do not match the media
-     type of the device.</p>
+     false. Effectively, they are treated identically to known media types
+     that do not match the media type of the device.</p>
 
     <div class=example>
      <p>The media query "<code>unknown</code>" will evaluate to false, unless
@@ -780,9 +784,10 @@ <h3 id=width><span class=secno>4.1 </span>width</h3>
    the width of the targeted display area of the output device. For
    continuous media, this is the width of the viewport (as described by CSS2,
    section 9.1.1 <a href="#CSS21"
-   rel=biblioentry>[CSS21]<!--{{!CSS21}}--></a>). For paged media, this is
-   the width of the page box (as described by CSS2, section 13.2 <a
-   href="#CSS21" rel=biblioentry>[CSS21]<!--{{!CSS21}}--></a>).
+   rel=biblioentry>[CSS21]<!--{{!CSS21}}--></a>) including the size of a
+   rendered scroll bar (if any). For paged media, this is the width of the
+   page box (as described by CSS2, section 13.2 <a href="#CSS21"
+   rel=biblioentry>[CSS21]<!--{{!CSS21}}--></a>).
 
   <p>A specified &lt;length> cannot be negative.
 
@@ -827,8 +832,9 @@ <h3 id=height><span class=secno>4.2 </span>height</h3>
 
   <p>The &lsquo;<code class=css>height</code>&rsquo; media feature describes
    the height of the targeted display area of the output device. For
-   continuous media, this is the height of the viewport. For paged media,
-   this is the height of the page box.
+   continuous media, this is the height of the viewport including the size of
+   a rendered scroll bar (if any). For paged media, this is the height of the
+   page box.
 
   <p>A specified &lt;length> cannot be negative.
 
@@ -1222,10 +1228,10 @@ <h3 class=no-num id=normative-references>Normative references</h3>
    <dt id=CSS21>[CSS21]
 
    <dd>Bert Bos; et al. <a
-    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/CR-CSS21-20090423"><cite>Cascading Style
+    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/CR-CSS2-20090423/"><cite>Cascading Style
     Sheets Level 2 Revision 1 (CSS 2.1) Specification.</cite></a> 23 April
     2009. W3C Candidate Recommendation. (Work in progress.) URL: <a
-    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/CR-CSS21-20090423">http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/CR-CSS21-20090423</a>
+    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/CR-CSS2-20090423/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2009/CR-CSS2-20090423/</a>
     </dd>
    <!---->
   </dl>

css3-mediaqueries/Overview.src.html

@@ -252,6 +252,12 @@ <h2 id="media0">Media Queries</h2>
 class="index">media features</span>. If the media type is omitted it is
 assumed to be ''all''.</p>
 
+<p>Statements regarding media queries in this section assume the
+<a href="#syntax">syntax section</a> is followed. Media queries that do not
+conform to the syntax are discussed in the
+<a href="#error-handling">error handling section</a>. I.e. the syntax takes
+precedence over requirements in this section.</p>
+
 <div class="example">
 <p>Here is a simple example written in HTML:</p>
 <pre>
@@ -484,8 +490,7 @@ <h3>Error Handling</h3>
 <ul>
  <li>
   <p><strong>Unknown media types.</strong> Unknown media types evaluate to
-  false, unless negated by the ''not'' keyword, in which case they evaluate
-  to true. Effectively, they are treated identically to known media types
+  false. Effectively, they are treated identically to known media types
   that do not match the media type of the device.</p>
 
   <div class="example">
@@ -640,9 +645,9 @@ <h3 id="width">width</h3>
 
 <p>The ''width'' media feature describes the width of the targeted display
 area of the output device. For continuous media, this is the width
-of the viewport (as described by CSS2, section 9.1.1 [[!CSS21]]). For
-paged media, this is the width of the page box (as described by CSS2,
-section 13.2 [[!CSS21]]).</p>
+of the viewport (as described by CSS2, section 9.1.1 [[!CSS21]]) including
+the size of a rendered scroll bar (if any). For paged media, this is the
+width of the page box (as described by CSS2, section 13.2 [[!CSS21]]).</p>
 
 <p>A specified &lt;length> cannot be negative.</p>
 
@@ -695,8 +700,8 @@ <h3 id="height">height</h3>
 
 <p>The ''height'' media feature describes the height of the targeted display
 area of the output device. For continuous media, this is the height
-of the viewport. For paged media, this is the height of the page
-box.</p>
+of the viewport including the size of a rendered scroll bar (if any). For
+paged media, this is the height of the page box.</p>
 
 <p>A specified &lt;length> cannot be negative.</p>