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@@ -60,12 +60,11 @@
 
    <h1>CSS Color Module Level 3</h1>
 
-   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=longstatus-date>Editor's Draft 28 September
-    2010</h2>
+   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=longstatus-date>Editor's Draft 7 October 2010</h2>
 
    <dl>
     <dt>This version:</dt>
-    <!-- <dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/ED-css3-color-20100928">http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/ED-css3-color-20100928</a></dd> -->
+    <!-- <dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/ED-css3-color-20101007">http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/ED-css3-color-20101007</a></dd> -->
 
     <dd><a
      href="http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-color/">http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-color/</a>
@@ -895,7 +894,7 @@ <h4 id=transparent><span class=secno>4.2.3. </span>&lsquo;<a
    <dt><dfn id=transparent-def>transparent</dfn>
 
    <dd>Fully transparent. This keyword can be considered a shorthand for
-    rgba(0,0,0,0), which is its computed value.
+    transparent black, rgba(0,0,0,0), which is its computed value.
   </dl>
 
   <h4 id=hsl-color><span class=secno>4.2.4. </span>HSL color values</h4>
@@ -924,7 +923,8 @@ <h4 id=hsl-color><span class=secno>4.2.4. </span>HSL color values</h4>
    given. By definition red=0=360, and the other colors are spread around the
    circle, so green=120, blue=240, etc. As an angle, it implicitly wraps
    around such that -120=240 and 480=120. One way an implementation could
-   normalize such an angle x to the range [0,360) is to compute (((x mod 360)
+   normalize such an angle x to the range [0,360) (<em>i.e.</em> zero
+   degrees, inclusive, to 360 degrees, exclusive) is to compute (((x mod 360)
    + 360) mod 360). Saturation and lightness are represented as percentages.
    100% is full saturation, and 0% is a shade of gray. 0% lightness is black,
    100% lightness is white, and 50% lightness is &ldquo;normal&rdquo;.
@@ -936,7 +936,7 @@ <h4 id=hsl-color><span class=secno>4.2.4. </span>HSL color values</h4>
 
    <pre>
 * { color: hsl(0, 100%, 50%) }   /* red */
-* { color: hsl(120, 100%, 50%) } /* green */ 
+* { color: hsl(120, 100%, 50%) } /* lime */ 
 * { color: hsl(120, 100%, 25%) } /* dark green */ 
 * { color: hsl(120, 100%, 75%) } /* light green */ 
 * { color: hsl(120, 75%, 75%) }  /* pastel green, and so on */
@@ -997,7 +997,7 @@ <h5 id=hsl-examples><span class=secno>4.2.4.1. </span>HSL examples</h5>
     <tr>
      <th>
 
-     <th colspan=5>0&deg; Red
+     <th colspan=5>0&deg; Reds
 
     <tr>
      <th>
@@ -1140,7 +1140,7 @@ <h5 id=hsl-examples><span class=secno>4.2.4.1. </span>HSL examples</h5>
     <tr>
      <th>
 
-     <th colspan=5>30&deg; Red-Yellow (=Orange)
+     <th colspan=5>30&deg; Red-Yellows (=Oranges)
 
     <tr>
      <th>
@@ -1283,7 +1283,7 @@ <h5 id=hsl-examples><span class=secno>4.2.4.1. </span>HSL examples</h5>
     <tr>
      <th>
 
-     <th colspan=5>60&deg; Yellow
+     <th colspan=5>60&deg; Yellows
 
     <tr>
      <th>
@@ -1426,7 +1426,7 @@ <h5 id=hsl-examples><span class=secno>4.2.4.1. </span>HSL examples</h5>
     <tr>
      <th>
 
-     <th colspan=5>90&deg; Yellow-Green
+     <th colspan=5>90&deg; Yellow-Greens
 
     <tr>
      <th>
@@ -1569,7 +1569,7 @@ <h5 id=hsl-examples><span class=secno>4.2.4.1. </span>HSL examples</h5>
     <tr>
      <th>
 
-     <th colspan=5>120&deg; Green
+     <th colspan=5>120&deg; Greens
 
     <tr>
      <th>
@@ -1712,7 +1712,7 @@ <h5 id=hsl-examples><span class=secno>4.2.4.1. </span>HSL examples</h5>
     <tr>
      <th>
 
-     <th colspan=5>150&deg; Green-Cyan
+     <th colspan=5>150&deg; Green-Cyans
 
     <tr>
      <th>
@@ -1855,7 +1855,7 @@ <h5 id=hsl-examples><span class=secno>4.2.4.1. </span>HSL examples</h5>
     <tr>
      <th>
 
-     <th colspan=5>180&deg; Cyan
+     <th colspan=5>180&deg; Cyans
 
     <tr>
      <th>
@@ -1998,7 +1998,7 @@ <h5 id=hsl-examples><span class=secno>4.2.4.1. </span>HSL examples</h5>
     <tr>
      <th>
 
-     <th colspan=5>210&deg; Cyan-Blue
+     <th colspan=5>210&deg; Cyan-Blues
 
     <tr>
      <th>
@@ -2141,7 +2141,7 @@ <h5 id=hsl-examples><span class=secno>4.2.4.1. </span>HSL examples</h5>
     <tr>
      <th>
 
-     <th colspan=5>240&deg; Blue
+     <th colspan=5>240&deg; Blues
 
     <tr>
      <th>
@@ -2284,7 +2284,7 @@ <h5 id=hsl-examples><span class=secno>4.2.4.1. </span>HSL examples</h5>
     <tr>
      <th>
 
-     <th colspan=5>270&deg; Blue-Magenta
+     <th colspan=5>270&deg; Blue-Magentas
 
     <tr>
      <th>
@@ -2427,7 +2427,7 @@ <h5 id=hsl-examples><span class=secno>4.2.4.1. </span>HSL examples</h5>
     <tr>
      <th>
 
-     <th colspan=5>300&deg; Magenta
+     <th colspan=5>300&deg; Magentas
 
     <tr>
      <th>
@@ -2570,7 +2570,7 @@ <h5 id=hsl-examples><span class=secno>4.2.4.1. </span>HSL examples</h5>
     <tr>
      <th>
 
-     <th colspan=5>330&deg; Magenta-Red
+     <th colspan=5>330&deg; Magenta-Reds
 
     <tr>
      <th>
@@ -4922,8 +4922,12 @@ <h3 id=normative><span class=secno>11.1. </span>Normative</h3>
 
    <dt id=COLORIMETRY>[COLORIMETRY]
 
-   <dd><cite>Colorimetry, Second Edition.</cite> CIE Publication 15.2-1986.
-    ISBN 3-900-734-00-3</dd>
+   <dd><a
+    href="http://www.cie.co.at/publ/abst/15-2004.html"><cite>Colorimetry,
+    Third Edition.</cite></a> CIE Publication 15:2004. ISBN 978-3-901906-33-6
+    URL: <a
+    href="http://www.cie.co.at/publ/abst/15-2004.html">http://www.cie.co.at/publ/abst/15-2004.html</a>
+    </dd>
    <!---->
 
    <dt id=CSS21>[CSS21]
@@ -4941,8 +4945,8 @@ <h3 id=normative><span class=secno>11.1. </span>Normative</h3>
    <dd><a href="http://www.iec.ch/nr1899.htm"><cite>Multimedia systems and
     equipment - Colour measurement and management - Part 2-1: Colour
     management - Default RGB colour space - sRGB.</cite></a> IEC 61966-2-1
-    (1999-10). ISBN: 2-8318-4989-6 - ICS codes: 33.160.60, 37.080 - TC 100 -
-    51 pp. URL: <a
+    (1999-10) ISBN: 2-8318-4989-6 - ICS codes: 33.160.60, 37.080 - TC 100 -
+    51 pp. as amended by Amendment A1:2003. URL: <a
     href="http://www.iec.ch/nr1899.htm">http://www.iec.ch/nr1899.htm</a></dd>
    <!---->
 
@@ -5055,10 +5059,10 @@ <h3 id=informative><span class=secno>11.2. </span>Informative</h3>
    <dt id=XML10>[XML10]
 
    <dd>C. M. Sperberg-McQueen; et al. <a
-    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/PER-xml-20080205"><cite>Extensible Markup
-    Language (XML) 1.0 (Fifth Edition).</cite></a> 10 February 1998. W3C
-    Proposed Edited Recommendation. Revised 5 February 2008 URL: <a
-    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/PER-xml-20080205">http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/PER-xml-20080205</a>
+    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xml-20081126/"><cite>Extensible
+    Markup Language (XML) 1.0 (Fifth Edition).</cite></a> 26 November 2008.
+    W3C Recommendation. URL: <a
+    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xml-20081126/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-xml-20081126/</a>
     </dd>
    <!---->
   </dl>