Address Bert's comments <http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-style/2010Jan/0320.html>

Author: fantasai

css-style-attr/Overview.html

@@ -15,11 +15,12 @@
 
    <h1>CSS Styling Attribute Syntax Level 1</h1>
 
-   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=longstatus-date>Editor's Draft 7 January 2010</h2>
+   <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=longstatus-date>Editor's Draft 14 January
+    2010</h2>
 
    <dl>
     <dt>This version:</dt>
-    <!-- <dd><dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/WD-css-style-attr-20100107/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/WD-css-style-attr-20100107/</a></dd> -->
+    <!-- <dd><dd><a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/WD-css-style-attr-20100114/">http://www.w3.org/TR/2010/WD-css-style-attr-20100114/</a></dd> -->
 
     <dd><a
      href="http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-style-attr/">http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css-style-attr/</a>
@@ -129,14 +130,12 @@ <h2 class="no-num no-toc" id=contents>Table of contents</h2>
 
    <li><a href="#syntax"><span class=secno>3. </span>Syntax and Parsing</a>
 
-   <li><a href="#grammar"><span class=secno>4. </span>Grammar</a>
-
-   <li><a href="#interpret"><span class=secno>5. </span>Cascading and
+   <li><a href="#interpret"><span class=secno>4. </span>Cascading and
     Interpretation</a>
 
-   <li><a href="#ack"><span class=secno>6. </span>Acknowledgments</a>
+   <li><a href="#ack"><span class=secno>5. </span>Acknowledgments</a>
 
-   <li><a href="#references"><span class=secno>7. </span>References </a>
+   <li><a href="#references"><span class=secno>6. </span>References </a>
     <ul class=toc>
      <li class=no-num><a href="#normative-references">Normative
       references</a>
@@ -154,7 +153,7 @@ <h2 id=intro><span class=secno>1. </span>Introduction</h2>
    to specific elements in documents. If a document format defines a styling
    attribute and the attribute accepts CSS as its value, then this
    specification defines this <dfn id=css-styling-attribute>CSS styling
-   attribute</dfn>&lsquo;<code class=css>s syntax and interpretation. </code>
+   attribute</dfn>&rsquo;s syntax and interpretation.
 
   <div class=example>
    <p>The following example shows the use of the <code>style</code> attribute
@@ -217,40 +216,32 @@ <h2 id=syntax><span class=secno>3. </span>Syntax and Parsing</h2>
   <p>The value of the styling attribute must match the syntax of the contents
    of a CSS <a
    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS21/syndata.html#rule-sets">declaration
-   block</a>. The interpreter must parse the styling attribute&rsquo;s value
-   using the same forward-compatible parsing rules that apply to parsing
-   declaration block contents in a normal CSS style sheet. See <a
+   block</a>, whose formal grammar is given below in terms of the <a
+   href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS21/syndata.html#syntax">CSS core
+   grammar</a>:
+
+  <pre>
+declaration-list
+  : S* declaration [ ';' S* declaration ]*
+  ;
+</pre>
+
+  <p class=note>Note that following the CSS2.1 convention, comment tokens are
+   not shown in the rule above.
+
+  <p>The interpreter must parse the styling attribute's value using the same
+   forward-compatible parsing rules that apply to parsing declaration block
+   contents in a normal CSS style sheet. See <a
    href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS21/syndata.html">chapter 4 of the CSS2.1
-   specification</a>. <a href="#CSS21"
+   specification</a> for details. <a href="#CSS21"
    rel=biblioentry>[CSS21]<!--{{!CSS21}}--></a>
 
   <p class=note>Note that because there is no open brace delimiting the
    declaration list in the CSS styling attribute syntax, a close brace
    (<code>}</code>) in the styling attribute's value does not terminate the
    style data: it is merely an invalid token.
 
-  <h2 id=grammar><span class=secno>4. </span>Grammar</h2>
-
-  <p>The syntax of the CSS fragment that is allowed as the CSS styling
-   attribute's value is formally specified as follows:
-
-  <pre>
-inline-stylesheet
-  : S* declaration-list
-  ;
-
-declaration-list
-  : declaration [ ';' S* declaration ]*
-  ;
-</pre>
-
-  <p>Please refer to the grammar in <a
-   href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS21/grammar.html">appendix D of the CSS2.1
-   specification</a> <a href="#CSS21"
-   rel=biblioentry>[CSS21]<!--{{!CSS21}}--></a> for the definition of the
-   symbols not defined here.
-
-  <h2 id=interpret><span class=secno>5. </span>Cascading and Interpretation</h2>
+  <h2 id=interpret><span class=secno>4. </span>Cascading and Interpretation</h2>
 
   <p>The declarations in a styling attribute apply to the element to which
    the attribute belongs. CSS2.1 <a
@@ -273,12 +264,12 @@ <h2 id=interpret><span class=secno>5. </span>Cascading and Interpretation</h2>
    independently and treated as a separate style rule, the ordering of which
    should be defined by the document language, else is undefined.
 
-  <h2 id=ack><span class=secno>6. </span>Acknowledgments</h2>
+  <h2 id=ack><span class=secno>5. </span>Acknowledgments</h2>
 
   <p>Thanks to feedback from Daniel Glazman, Ian Hickson, Eric A. Meyer,
    Bj&ouml;rn H&ouml;hrmann.
 
-  <h2 id=references><span class=secno>7. </span>References</h2>
+  <h2 id=references><span class=secno>6. </span>References</h2>
 
   <h3 class=no-num id=normative-references>Normative references</h3>
   <!--begin-normative-->

css-style-attr/Overview.src.html

@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ <h2 id="intro">Introduction</h2>
 the author to directly apply style information to specific elements
 in documents. If a document format defines a styling attribute and the
 attribute accepts CSS as its value, then this specification defines this
-<dfn>CSS styling attribute</dfn>'s syntax and interpretation.
+<dfn>CSS styling attribute</dfn>&rsquo;s syntax and interpretation.
 
 <div class="example">
   <p>The following example shows the use of the <code>style</code> attribute
@@ -111,36 +111,29 @@ <h2 id="syntax">Syntax and Parsing</h2>
 
 <p>The value of the styling attribute must match the syntax of the contents of
 a CSS <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS21/syndata.html#rule-sets">declaration
-block</a>. The interpreter must parse the styling attribute's value using the
+block</a>, whose formal grammar is given below in terms of the
+<a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS21/syndata.html#syntax">CSS core grammar</a>:
+
+<pre>
+declaration-list
+  : S* declaration [ ';' S* declaration ]*
+  ;
+</pre>
+
+<p class="note">Note that following the CSS2.1 convention, comment tokens
+are not shown in the rule above.
+
+<p>The interpreter must parse the styling attribute's value using the
 same forward-compatible parsing rules that apply to parsing declaration block
 contents in a normal CSS style sheet. See
 <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS21/syndata.html">chapter 4 of the CSS2.1
-specification</a>. [[!CSS21]]
+specification</a> for details. [[!CSS21]]
 
 <p class="note">Note that because there is no open brace delimiting the
 declaration list in the CSS styling attribute syntax, a close brace
 (<code>}</code>) in the styling attribute's value does not terminate the
 style data: it is merely an invalid token.</p>
 
-<h2 id="grammar">Grammar</h2>
-
-<p>The syntax of the CSS fragment that is allowed as the CSS styling
-attribute's value is formally specified as follows:
-
-<pre>
-inline-stylesheet
-  : S* declaration-list
-  ;
-
-declaration-list
-  : declaration [ ';' S* declaration ]*
-  ;
-</pre>
-
-<p>Please refer to the grammar in <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS21/grammar.html">appendix D
-of the CSS2.1 specification</a> [[!CSS21]] for the definition of the symbols
-not defined here.
-
 <h2 id="interpret">Cascading and Interpretation</h2>
 
 <p>The declarations in a styling attribute apply to the element to which