CREATIVE WRITING TIPS - Common Errors - Paper 3
CREATIVE WRITING TIPS - Common Errors - Paper 3
access I will need access to your computer records to solve the case.
excess If you eat an excess of sweets, you will feel ill.
choose In Grade Ten we must choose which subjects to take. (present tense)
chose In Grade Ten I chose the subjects I wanted to finish Grade 12 with. (past tense)
chosen Which subjects have you chosen?
lose She will lose marks if she doesn’t read the questions properly.
loose Loose hair must be tied up for school.
patience One needs a large amount of patience when dealing with small children.
patient I think I am very patient as I don’t get angered that quickly.
The patient was admitted to the hospital.
patients The doctor saw many patients before it was my turn.
though Even though she studied, she still failed her test.
threw John threw the ball over the wall.
through Don’t walk through the rain without an umbrella.
DON’TS
Content
DO NOT centre the content around anyone of the following topics! It usually leads to inappropriate
content:
Religion
Sex (this includes rape, prostitution, abortion etc.)
Alcohol
Drugs
Politics
Redundancy
This is the repetition of an idea or the use of two words which mean the same thing.
E.g. Error I was all the time, constantly checking my watch.
Rather I constantly checked my watch.
E.g. Error I am grateful for each and every present I received at my party.
Rather I am grateful for every present I received at my party.
E.g. Error I went back home.
Rather I went home.
E.g. Error He returned my book back to me after three weeks.
Rather He returned my book after three weeks.
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E.g. Error I can’t wait for her to respond back to my sms.
Rather I can’t wait for her to respond to my sms.
E.g. Error I was raised up by my older brother.
Rather I was raised by my older brother.
E.g. Error Both her two parents died when she was six.
Rather Her parents died when she was six.
E.g. Error At the camp we sat in a round circle around the fire.
Rather At the camp we sat in a circle the fire.
E.g. Error She was the only seventeen-year-old teenager who was at the party.
Rather She was the only seventeen-year-old at the party.
Forward slashes
Do NOT use forward slashes!
E.g. Error He/she must have known I would be late.
Rather He must have known I would be late.
They must have known I would be late.
E.g. Error It was three/four hours later when I arrived for the interview.
Rather It was three or four hours later when I arrived for the interview.
It was about three hours later when I arrived for the interview.
Brackets
Brackets are used for parenthesis or to give additional information. Brackets are very often used
incorrectly and it is advisable not to use them.
E.g. Error I wanted to run (I was scared) but I couldn’t move.
Rather I was so scared that I wanted to run but I couldn’t move.
Conjunctions
Do NOT start a sentence or especially a paragraph with a conjunction. Remember no more than two
conjunctions per sentence.
E.g. And then …
But …
Then …
Do NOT use two conjunctions immediately after each other.
E.g. But yet ...
Repetition of words
Do not use the same word or phrase over and over. Be aware of the overuse of words such as:
Always Rather: constantly, often, regularly, frequently, repeatedly
Nice Rather: lovely, wonderful, pleasant, enjoyable
Very Rather: especially, awfully, particularly
A lot Rather: many, numerous, several, various
Things Rather: Be specific! ‘Things’ can refer to: possessions, belongings, groceries,
ingredients, items etc
Remember good writing is descriptive. Use words which are as specific as possible. This will create a
vivid picture in the reader’s mind.
Abbreviations
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Do NOT use abbreviations. Mxit language is completely unacceptable. No ampersands (&) unless it
forms part of a name e.g. ‘Murray & Asscociates’.
E.g. SABC Tv
ID no. ur
nd
2 b4
ur cuz
e.g. etc.
& str
Clichés
Do NOT use clichés. A cliché is an overused expression. The expression loses its emphasis due to
being overused.
E.g. ‘Education is the key to success’.
‘A wise man once said …’
‘pass with flying colours’
‘go the extra mile’
‘at the end of the day’
‘to put food on the table’
REGISTER
Ensure the level of language (register) or word choice (diction) is appropriate to the type of writing and
the audience.
Verbosity
Avoid using too many or unnecessarily long words (e.g. hereby, whereby etc.) This is often done with
the intention of trying to impress the reader but often results in meaninglessness.
E.g. Error Her friend is a girl by the name of Jane and lives two houses away from her.
Rather Her friend, Jane, lives two houses away from her.
E.g. Error We live in a city by the name of Polokwane which is located in a province
by the name of Limpopo.
Rather We live in Polokwane in Limpopo Province.
Slang
NO SLANG is acceptable even if it is written it inverted commas.
E.g. ‘bru’ ‘cool’
‘crew’ ‘chill’
‘hustling’ ‘swag’
Colloquial register
More informal register should be used carefully.
Use university instead of varsity
Use temporary jobs instead of piece jobs
Use the oldest instead of the first born
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TIPS
Error: I was schooling at Northern Academy.
I attend school at Northern Academy.
High school is written in capitals only when it is part of the name of a school.
E.g. I go to school at Northern Academy High School.
I enjoyed my years at high school.
When referring to tertiary education, do not use the word tertiary on its own. To avoid making a
mistake, rather use the words: college or university.
E.g. I hope to attend the University of Pretoria in 2012.
When referring to primary or secondary school, always follow the word ‘primary’ or
‘secondary’ with the word ‘school’.
Error: I started primary in 1998.
I started going to primary school in 1998.
Order of adjectives
Opinion Size Age Shape Colour Origin Material Purpose
a silly young English Man
a Huge round metal Bowl
a Small red sleeping Bag
DO NOT use more than one of the same type of adjective to describe a noun.
E.g. Error It was some few minutes before he arrived home.
Rather It was a few minutes before he arrived home.
Pronoun usage
Female: She Her Hers Herself
Male: He His His Himself
DO’S
I not ‘i’
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When you refer to yourself, always write the personal pronoun ‘I’ with a capital letter.
Dates
Write the date out in words when it appears in a paragraph. If a date forms part of the address of a
letter, heading to a diary entry, invitation etc write the day in numbers.
E.g. It was the second of December 2010 when we left for Durban.
I am referring to the article ‘Crime escalates’ published on the thirty-first of January 2010.
Time
Write time out in words.
E.g. ten o’ clock
ten minutes past eight in the morning
quarter past three in the afternoon
half past seven in the evening
quarter to nine at night
Numbers
All numbers under 100 must be written in words.
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E.g. Grade Twelve
thirty-four
All numbers 100 and greater must be written in numerals.
E.g. 2011
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Prepositions
Pay attention to your prepositions.
E.g. I am in Grade Twelve.
I am at school.
Sentences
Start each sentence with a capital letter and end it with a full stop, exclamation mark or a question
mark.
Ensure each sentence contains a subject and a finite verb!
AVOID USING
Avoid making unnecessary mistakes by NOT using the following, unless the format demands it:
Dates
Times
Direct speech
The ellipses (…)